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Proud father
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:04:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you're sitting there cigar in hand
thinking of ways to be the big man
you're breathing aloud so i acknowledge your presence
keeping me on edge frozen in my chair
your smoke evading
my space
my air
when i dream you're looking into me with a dark look of destruction in your eyes
you shout at me
constantly demanding pride
and when i bring failure
you advise me to hide
but too many doors have slammed behind me now
locks prevent me from coming in
you
my dad
just hit me with your mighty swing
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loopylou
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2004-03-11 05:04:53]
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Re: Proud father
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 05:25:34 AM AEST
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Wow this is really sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
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