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Array ( [sid] => 38057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Marie [time] => 2004-03-09 23:34:57 [hometext] => I wrote this about a friend that i worry over constantly because shes has an eating disorder and its taking over her life [bodytext] => I’m here hun
And though you may not
Want me to,
I’m worried
Scared
But only ‘cuz I love you

Helpless
I don’t want you to
Push me away

I’m here hun
Even if you think I don’t care
You are skinny
I know you don’t believe it
So I don’t say it

Don’t push me away
I’m here hun

I don’t mention it
And I’ll never tell
But if the worst happens
It will be my fault

I’m here hun
And you can’t push me away
I’m going through this
With you
So you can understand
I won’t desert you now
Not when you need a helping hand

I’m here hun
Don’t push me away

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 16 [informant] => kayald [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Dear Marie

Contributed by kayald on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:34:57 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I’m here hun
And though you may not
Want me to,
I’m worried
Scared
But only ‘cuz I love you

Helpless
I don’t want you to
Push me away

I’m here hun
Even if you think I don’t care
You are skinny
I know you don’t believe it
So I don’t say it

Don’t push me away
I’m here hun

I don’t mention it
And I’ll never tell
But if the worst happens
It will be my fault

I’m here hun
And you can’t push me away
I’m going through this
With you
So you can understand
I won’t desert you now
Not when you need a helping hand

I’m here hun
Don’t push me away

Copyright Â© kayald ... [ 2004-03-09 23:34:57]
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Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by Jade on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, sad, but great. I think even though she does not believe you when you say she is skinny you should keep saying it. Let her know there are hundreds of us who have been there and understand what she is going through.

Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by perfection on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:47:58 PM AEST
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Hey Great Poem.

Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST
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Awww this is so tender and sweet.... hope she knows how you feel..
Jenni

Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 12:44:32 AM AEST
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Hey! Great poem! Don't give up on her and don't let her give up... she needs u now more than ever!! Ur both in my prayers!!!
~Donna~

Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by hidden_dezires on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:22:53 AM AEST
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quite touching ..your friend is lucky to have someone who cares as you do...loved it alot....hd

Re: Dear Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 02:00:03 AM AEST
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wonderfully loving caring poem, hugs n' love nessa

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