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Array ( [sid] => 38049 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Devistatingly True [time] => 2004-03-09 22:56:49 [hometext] => There are just some feelings that are too deep to express..... If only you knew. [bodytext] => You'll never know how much your loved,
You've closed yourself off completely -
Each time I scratch the surface.....
To the side I'm shoved;
Once again, the past defeats me.
Your scared, and so we're both alone.
Will you ever find a way to believe in me?
If you could look into my eyes -
And see the depths of these feelings....
You wouldn't be able to bare it;
Knowing all this time -
Emotions like that existed...
And you weren't even aware of it.
Some people search for happiness,
And never find it;
Never even realize....
At some point it was there, but they denied it.
So devistatingly true and you'll never see...
If you'd give me half a chance,
I'd be all you'd ever need;
If only there was a way to break through,
If only you could believe....
My love would never forsake you. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 22 [informant] => harshreality [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Devistatingly True

Contributed by harshreality on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 10:56:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You'll never know how much your loved,
You've closed yourself off completely -
Each time I scratch the surface.....
To the side I'm shoved;
Once again, the past defeats me.
Your scared, and so we're both alone.
Will you ever find a way to believe in me?
If you could look into my eyes -
And see the depths of these feelings....
You wouldn't be able to bare it;
Knowing all this time -
Emotions like that existed...
And you weren't even aware of it.
Some people search for happiness,
And never find it;
Never even realize....
At some point it was there, but they denied it.
So devistatingly true and you'll never see...
If you'd give me half a chance,
I'd be all you'd ever need;
If only there was a way to break through,
If only you could believe....
My love would never forsake you.




Copyright © harshreality ... [ 2004-03-09 22:56:49]
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Re: Devistatingly True (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:06:33 PM AEST
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Good write..really sad..
Jenni


Re: Devistatingly True (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:35:04 PM AEST
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such beautiful expression of feelings, i hope it all works out for you soon, warm hugs n' love nessa


Re: Devistatingly True (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST
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It's a harsh reality of life... I've been there and done that... as probably most ppl have... very deep... and very true and very sad... cause in the end who winds up hurting who? Great write ... keep 'em comin'
~Donna~


Re: Devistatingly True (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:26:22 PM AEST
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i feel ya read my beautiful trilogy its practically says the same thing just in three poems and a combined 12 pages. good job i garrantee that she cried


Re: Devistatingly True (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 02:14:06 PM AEST
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ah.... the things you say... the things we've gone through...




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