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Fly On The Wall
Contributed by
Elf
on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 05:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I sit and watch
as they all go by.
Seeming invisible
To the naked eye.
I see it all.
All they do.
Even people
Just like you.
The lies they tell
The truths they twist.
Reality's lost
in the darkest mist.
The ones they hurt
are left behind.
With no one to care
None to remind.
I'm a fly on the wall.
Watching all that they do.
Watching everyone, everywhere
That's just like you.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-03-08 17:12:54]
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Re: Fly On The Wall
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 06:58:41 PM AEST
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I like the perspective, this doe's what it's meant to do -make you think .
good write.
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Re: Fly On The Wall
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 08:42:04 PM AEST
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i like this. its different and just awesome! wonderfully written. good job keep it up
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