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Treading carefully through a lifelong dream
Coldness of reflection touching smooth skin
Soft waves washing away sensitive thoughts
Lost to the tranquil mindset of sweet death
Freezing underneath the moons gentle gaze
Swimming with a determined panic
It must end, now, now
Pushing down into the depths of pain
Crushing weight upon my lungs
Laughing inside, die you useless *****
Hatred playing out inside your personal tv set
both sides flashing by, without thought
The end? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 36 [informant] => silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Drown

Contributed by silent on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 04:17:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Take your time walking down that road
Treading carefully through a lifelong dream
Coldness of reflection touching smooth skin
Soft waves washing away sensitive thoughts
Lost to the tranquil mindset of sweet death
Freezing underneath the moons gentle gaze
Swimming with a determined panic
It must end, now, now
Pushing down into the depths of pain
Crushing weight upon my lungs
Laughing inside, die you useless *****
Hatred playing out inside your personal tv set
both sides flashing by, without thought
The end?

Copyright © silent ... [ 2004-03-08 04:17:45]
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Re: Drown (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 02:37:18 PM AEST
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Drowning is one of the most terrifying ways to die...according to some studies...but I guess we can't be sure as no one who did ever came back to tell us. Rather dark but applicable...I am terrified of drowning...and I feel fear just reading this vivid poem....1..2..3.....okay I'm cool again...stop that hyperventilating

Re: Drown (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:20:49 AM AEST
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You are tormented, aren't you. Cutting words, strong description, the way poetry should be.
Hur

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