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Array ( [sid] => 37717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so much love, so much pain [time] => 2004-03-07 18:08:04 [hometext] => written about this guy... [bodytext] => I lie here in this pool of sorrow, thinking thoughts of blood and dreams, of you,
These memories that plague my mind undo the walls I build, as all the tears seep through,
I drown inside these unforgiving sands of time in my mind – this heart that was forever yours and never mine
And I sacrifice my life to hold you, and I lose myself with every tear I cry

These puddles of ice that are the frozen lies that fall endlessly from my eyes
Tell stories of my life and moments lost in time, my love for you so purified,
I draw these kisses on my skin that I so long to have from you, to feel a pain so true,
And the barbed wire chains and razorblade games I play for want of you, I always lose.

I lay on this funeral bed you helped me make, memories of times passed where you and I have so beautifully lain,
Worshipping one another, entwined together in these black promises and hearts we so easily gave,
And now as I mourn here, ripped in two, longing for a part of you, wanting, needing your arms just to breathe,
And I’ve tried so hard not to love you, to erase these thoughts of you, but even in my sleep you invade my dreams.

In all these lives I reminisce in tears for you, so many words exchanged for every kiss we blew, so much pain embedded in this love, so many lies, so much truth,
So many years it took so little to lose, these hearts we bound together so tightly, so completely, so hard to undo,
And for now, I’ll cry for so many mistakes, for so many memories I’m left with only to hate,
For so many feelings in my heart that I want so much to fade,
Because so much love for so long can only leave so much pain
And forever, I love you, I hate you…I just want to be us again
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so much love, so much pain

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I lie here in this pool of sorrow, thinking thoughts of blood and dreams, of you,
These memories that plague my mind undo the walls I build, as all the tears seep through,
I drown inside these unforgiving sands of time in my mind – this heart that was forever yours and never mine
And I sacrifice my life to hold you, and I lose myself with every tear I cry

These puddles of ice that are the frozen lies that fall endlessly from my eyes
Tell stories of my life and moments lost in time, my love for you so purified,
I draw these kisses on my skin that I so long to have from you, to feel a pain so true,
And the barbed wire chains and razorblade games I play for want of you, I always lose.

I lay on this funeral bed you helped me make, memories of times passed where you and I have so beautifully lain,
Worshipping one another, entwined together in these black promises and hearts we so easily gave,
And now as I mourn here, ripped in two, longing for a part of you, wanting, needing your arms just to breathe,
And I’ve tried so hard not to love you, to erase these thoughts of you, but even in my sleep you invade my dreams.

In all these lives I reminisce in tears for you, so many words exchanged for every kiss we blew, so much pain embedded in this love, so many lies, so much truth,
So many years it took so little to lose, these hearts we bound together so tightly, so completely, so hard to undo,
And for now, I’ll cry for so many mistakes, for so many memories I’m left with only to hate,
For so many feelings in my heart that I want so much to fade,
Because so much love for so long can only leave so much pain
And forever, I love you, I hate you…I just want to be us again

Copyright Â© wyrd_faerie ... [ 2004-03-07 18:08:04]
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Re: so much love, so much pain (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:13:41 PM AEST
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this poem is really good but, (and htis is probably just because i have a simple mind and can't handle much), it could be a little shorter, or just broken up more in the last 2 stanzas to make it seem less bulky

Re: so much love, so much pain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 06:28:45 PM AEST
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ahh lucie, i love how you write, beautifully expressed, some excellent lines and images here, love these; "These puddles of ice that are the frozen lies that fall endlessly from my eyes/Tell stories of my life and moments lost in time, my love for you so purified,"
keep writin' hon, big hugs n' i love you, nessa x

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Re: so much love, so much pain (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 09:20:55 PM AEST
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There's just so much there... great imaginary though... reminds me of something I might write or even maybe have already written.... vdery emotional...
Keep writing!!
~Donna~

Re: so much love, so much pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:40:15 AM AEST
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this was amazing and so painfully sad it was hard to read it was written with such power that only u can convey. I don't want to sound full of myself, but I hope this wasn;t written to me or about me. Plz e-mail me I miss hearing from you... I truly do... keep up the writing hun.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: so much love, so much pain (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 07:16:24 PM AEST
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WOW. I loved your poem, it was so amazing. it really touched me & helped me a lot because I am going through similar emotions. It was a VERY good poem, a wonderful write. I hope to see more from you, for even though it's sad, it is truely amazing.

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