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Handicap Exclusion
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Kicked out
Left out
Sitting on the side
Not allowed
Protected from
Easy, normal things to do
All because
Beginning to show
Coming out
For the world to know
A new one for the love
And hate
Of it all
Knocked off this mountain top
Awaken
Say all
Too young
Too late now
Deal with it
As of fault
Held down
For reasons
Found ridiculous
By those who truly know
And have experienced
This
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2004-03-06 23:47:57]
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Re: Handicap Exclusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by EUGENE on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:24:06 PM AEST
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| It's though-provoking and deals on a social issue, the first ten lines grew out quietly like a fresh burd in a newly planted flower, but the last 12 lines showed all the blight that a tree encounters after full growth... this is poetic and the alliterative pattern used is fitting. |
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