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Array ( [sid] => 37416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See Ya Around [time] => 2004-03-05 00:14:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your words are like half empty glasses now not even half full
The words to make it easier in truth only feel almost cruel
You're here but are you really, your mind away not with me
See ya around, see ya somtime, yah i guess that's how it's gotta be

You wake up with a realization not sure for what or the how
It's just there unclouded but yet hazzy, yah that's the now
Dont try to ease the hurt, filter or assume ill just succumb
I mean really what do you think? im stupid or shallow or dumb?

I guess what was the unattainable, that now has become yours
Has lost its luster, its shine its,,,well it wont be no more
When you realize and wake up and its no longer there
Remember it was your doing not mine i actually cared [comments] => 1 [counter] => 319 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Wicked [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

See Ya Around

Contributed by Wicked on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:14:19 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Your words are like half empty glasses now not even half full
The words to make it easier in truth only feel almost cruel
You're here but are you really, your mind away not with me
See ya around, see ya somtime, yah i guess that's how it's gotta be

You wake up with a realization not sure for what or the how
It's just there unclouded but yet hazzy, yah that's the now
Dont try to ease the hurt, filter or assume ill just succumb
I mean really what do you think? im stupid or shallow or dumb?

I guess what was the unattainable, that now has become yours
Has lost its luster, its shine its,,,well it wont be no more
When you realize and wake up and its no longer there
Remember it was your doing not mine i actually cared

Copyright © Wicked ... [ 2004-03-05 00:14:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: See Ya Around (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:11:33 AM AEST
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Great write ... this poem had good flow, R&R and I liked your message ... go girl!

Jan

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