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Array ( [sid] => 37401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Old Woman [time] => 2004-03-04 22:30:50 [hometext] => Thoughts just passing [bodytext] => She sits and writes with a heavy heart
She gazes at the pictures not far away
There is Mama and Papa and the whole Family still
As they were ,seems only yesterday.

Strange how she can't remember, what she had for a meal in the morning .
But the sweet smell of the Clover and cut red flower, in her memories, are just as clear as this minute, today.

So she gathers her thoughts, and when things go out of sorts
She can simply remember her childhood or
her loves , her books or HER Warts.

This little Old Women, who's lived such a life . Gets so much more enjoyment from Memeries then Life.
So heres the proof dear reader we need not fear Old Age
Just think of it in reverse and don't look for the worst. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 398 [topic] => 64 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Old Woman

Contributed by Whisper on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:30:50 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

She sits and writes with a heavy heart
She gazes at the pictures not far away
There is Mama and Papa and the whole Family still
As they were ,seems only yesterday.

Strange how she can't remember, what she had for a meal in the morning .
But the sweet smell of the Clover and cut red flower, in her memories, are just as clear as this minute, today.

So she gathers her thoughts, and when things go out of sorts
She can simply remember her childhood or
her loves , her books or HER Warts.

This little Old Women, who's lived such a life . Gets so much more enjoyment from Memeries then Life.
So heres the proof dear reader we need not fear Old Age
Just think of it in reverse and don't look for the worst.

Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-03-04 22:30:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:40:39 PM AEST
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This is very encouraging..Thank you...
Welcome to ypdc...
Jenni

Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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I try not to think of it at all! good thought provoking read.

wildejohnny.

Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 01:54:50 AM AEST
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Good poem.. thanks for sharing this. venkat

Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyle on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:03:08 AM AEST
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This was a great poem! this should be on the top 30, i enjoyed it very much and loved the part where u said 'Gets so much more enjoyment from Memeries then Life'

Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:14:40 AM AEST
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They don't teach the right things in schools.

Bob

Re: Old Woman (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:47:19 AM AEST
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A really great poem, I am now in that age of your old woman and it is true what you say what happened yesterday is practicall forgotten but what happened fifty or sixty years ago is still vivid in my minds eye.Thank you for a wonderful poem

bernard.

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