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Array ( [sid] => 37365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fly away [time] => 2004-03-04 18:26:14 [hometext] => let me know what you think [bodytext] => i will walk here in solitude and darkness,
never knowing or finding my way,
i will sit here totally loveless,
until i find my light one day.

i know that there will always be darkness,
but i will always hope and pray,
i will sit here always waiting,
and i will find my light one day.

and on the day i find it,
i will spread my wings and fly away...
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fly away

Contributed by lostinmyself on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i will walk here in solitude and darkness,
never knowing or finding my way,
i will sit here totally loveless,
until i find my light one day.

i know that there will always be darkness,
but i will always hope and pray,
i will sit here always waiting,
and i will find my light one day.

and on the day i find it,
i will spread my wings and fly away...

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-03-04 18:26:14]
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Re: fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by lola on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed your poem.
i'm hoping i find someone that's just right for me some day!!

lola

Re: fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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I see your writer's block is fading. Nice stuff. Definitely a portrait of a moment in time.
Stitch

Re: fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:09:13 PM AEST
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I really liked your poem. I loved the descriptions especially- dark, yet hopeful at the same time, & so true. I love your style of writing. Keep it up!

Re: fly away (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:30:46 PM AEST
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this is exceptionally beautiful, whistful, hopeful, serene in its sadness, hugs n' love nessa

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