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Array ( [sid] => 37358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Flows From Me [time] => 2004-03-04 18:13:55 [hometext] => From a book Im putting together. Just want to know what u think b4 I publish it. *4 those who dont know, I used to be suicidal. Not any more though. * [bodytext] => A crimson river,
full of life,
from my body
floods my sight.

My mind goes numb,
my body; slack.
The will to live,
I do lack.

My eyes still see,
but I am blind
to all around me
to all mankind.

My ears still hear,
but I am deaf
to all the words,
save the call of Death.

My voice is caught
as I try to scream
in pain, in anger
of all I see.

Then all is black,
nothing to hear,
nothing to live for
nothing here.

I awake to find
you above me,
tending my wounds.
Only you love me.

But still a crimson river
flowing full of life,
flows so quickly from me
Completely floods my sight. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Flows From Me

Contributed by Elf on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:13:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A crimson river,
full of life,
from my body
floods my sight.

My mind goes numb,
my body; slack.
The will to live,
I do lack.

My eyes still see,
but I am blind
to all around me
to all mankind.

My ears still hear,
but I am deaf
to all the words,
save the call of Death.

My voice is caught
as I try to scream
in pain, in anger
of all I see.

Then all is black,
nothing to hear,
nothing to live for
nothing here.

I awake to find
you above me,
tending my wounds.
Only you love me.

But still a crimson river
flowing full of life,
flows so quickly from me
Completely floods my sight.

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-03-04 18:13:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Flows From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Elf on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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Even though I had one that loved me, I still cut. If it was just to "get rid of stress" or whatever. I still did it. I still love him though. Now he loves me even more that I've stopped. I stopped for him.
-*Valen*-

Re: Flows From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:16:25 PM AEST
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Good write! Keep it up!

Re: Flows From Me (User Rating: 1 )
by SpazzyMcGlee on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:17:10 PM AEST
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I liked it. I could almost feel what you were feeling...you're very talented.

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