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Array ( [sid] => 37108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FINAL GOODBYE [time] => 2004-03-02 20:02:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hey you sleek, slithering, serpent, commonly reffered to as my drugs
I command you in the name of Jesus son of God to stop your sadistic blood bath
To stop slaughtering the minds, lifes and souls of perfectly sane, intelligent, strong, children of our father almighty Lord, God
Stop your demented ways for one minute to listen to what I have to say
At a young age I grew to love and confide in your destructive, deminted, dishonest, dark, damp way of life
I took up for you when people tried to reveal your mask and sloth like ways of snatching and stealing peoples innocence
You cunning baffling creature from the furthest depths of the lake of fire known as Heides or Hell
No longer will I be mesmerized and engulfed by your firey, fradulent, violent, volcanic like flames
Your cats out of the bag
I now know your tremendous,trecherous, tortureous, tyrant like tricks
I have power so enormously grander than yours
You had death planned for me
My God has eternal life and love planned for me
All I got left to say is see ya would'nt want to be ya [comments] => 1 [counter] => 365 [topic] => 21 [informant] => justinblue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

FINAL GOODBYE

Contributed by justinblue on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 08:02:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Hey you sleek, slithering, serpent, commonly reffered to as my drugs
I command you in the name of Jesus son of God to stop your sadistic blood bath
To stop slaughtering the minds, lifes and souls of perfectly sane, intelligent, strong, children of our father almighty Lord, God
Stop your demented ways for one minute to listen to what I have to say
At a young age I grew to love and confide in your destructive, deminted, dishonest, dark, damp way of life
I took up for you when people tried to reveal your mask and sloth like ways of snatching and stealing peoples innocence
You cunning baffling creature from the furthest depths of the lake of fire known as Heides or Hell
No longer will I be mesmerized and engulfed by your firey, fradulent, violent, volcanic like flames
Your cats out of the bag
I now know your tremendous,trecherous, tortureous, tyrant like tricks
I have power so enormously grander than yours
You had death planned for me
My God has eternal life and love planned for me
All I got left to say is see ya would'nt want to be ya

Copyright © justinblue ... [ 2004-03-02 20:02:40]
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Re: FINAL GOODBYE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:04:28 PM AEST
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Amen!
Amen means it is done.
In Jesus name, amen!
sighned in Jesus blood, amen!
Very good write here.
Powerfull as it teaches others the power in the blood of Jesus.
Luv, huggs,
emy

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