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Array ( [sid] => 36988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart of Ice [time] => 2004-03-01 22:40:55 [hometext] => Here's a little poem I wrote for somebody who wrote me an email, who in there opinion, i cant write worth my own **** [bodytext] => you heartless *****
how could you
insult me

when you cant even write
anything yourself
I do hell of a lot betta
than you could ever do

so you go ahead
tell me im bad
tell me i suck
tell me im a horrible writer

but you
are a heartless b*tch
who couldnt recogonize beauty
if it smacked you
across your face [comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Heart of Ice

Contributed by monkey on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:40:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

you heartless *****
how could you
insult me

when you cant even write
anything yourself
I do hell of a lot betta
than you could ever do

so you go ahead
tell me im bad
tell me i suck
tell me im a horrible writer

but you
are a heartless b*tch
who couldnt recogonize beauty
if it smacked you
across your face

Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-03-01 22:40:55]
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Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:22:55 PM AEST
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give her hell lol. Some people feel more comfortable with insulting others. Dont give heed and keep writing.
michelle

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:16:06 AM AEST
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You should just ignore people like that. What is most important is what you think of yourself and your work. If you are happy with it, that is all that matters. Some people like my work, some don't. But I post anyone because I feel that if I like it there must be others that would like or enjoy reading it also. Don't let coldhearted mean people control your opinions. Some people are only happy making others unhappy. It seems to fill a empty void in their lives. Sad, but true.

Rainbows,
Rita

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:03:01 PM AEST
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You have alot of talent and a great writer. Ignore the ones who don't know it...Just continue writing! Kie

Re: Heart of Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:10:51 PM AEST
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*Smack! Boom! Bang! Fall!* Hehehe, that girl are certainly messing around with the wrong person! Do not need to take notice of such people, they just can't stay others do better than them and try to stir up some troubles, just let them carry on with it, they fail to see the beauty of your works don't mean we are, keep it up missa monkay!^_^

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