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Array ( [sid] => 36982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Orchard [time] => 2004-03-01 22:05:00 [hometext] => a new beginning.... [bodytext] => *********************************
sunlight, like scotch whiskey
in the bottom of a glass
i was dreaming of you
walking toward me
in the orchard
the trees heavy with fruit
you were suntanned and smiling
i was wearing a blue dress
my hair blowing in the breeze

your arms around me
would they be protective?
your breath on my cheek
like a promise of heaven
we fit together so perfectly
all our imperfections
perfectly revealed
under the shady tree
where pleasure
became our paradise

passionfruit, we found it
love's succulent juices
we laughed with abandon
having found each other
in this strange and foreign place
what are the chances
we would
look into each other's eyes

gmm 2004 [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 20 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

Orchard

Contributed by merry on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

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sunlight, like scotch whiskey
in the bottom of a glass
i was dreaming of you
walking toward me
in the orchard
the trees heavy with fruit
you were suntanned and smiling
i was wearing a blue dress
my hair blowing in the breeze

your arms around me
would they be protective?
your breath on my cheek
like a promise of heaven
we fit together so perfectly
all our imperfections
perfectly revealed
under the shady tree
where pleasure
became our paradise

passionfruit, we found it
love's succulent juices
we laughed with abandon
having found each other
in this strange and foreign place
what are the chances
we would
look into each other's eyes

gmm 2004

Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-03-01 22:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Orchard (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:22:04 PM AEST
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Hey...

I really like this one. Great write, good imaginary... Heh.

Blessed Be,
Mars

Re: Orchard (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:25:19 PM AEST
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mmmm dreamy!! so pretty, vivid, beautiful, simply excellent!:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Orchard (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:41:42 PM AEST
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i could watch it all unfold great write.

wildejohnny.

Re: Orchard (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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Mmmm, sensuous and delightful ... Jan

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