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Array ( [sid] => 36947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lying Here Alone [time] => 2004-03-01 17:40:46 [hometext] => It was a suicide letter. But of course i lived. [bodytext] => I lie here alone and
watch my life go by,
I watch all i've ever
known slowly fade away,
I live my wretched life
wishing to die,
When I know my debts
I can no longer pay,
I watch my dreams and
hopes go down the drain,
I watch my blood slowly fall to the floor as I think of all my pain,
I watch my once called
happy life turn to hell,
I think of all my strife,
Hell starts when you hear
that wedding bell,
When I wish I could end my life,
I lie here and think why am
I hear,
I lie hear and wish my life
was better,
When all I feel is pain
and fear,
I think of my horrid life
as I write this letter,
So now I slowly fade
out of sight,
Today is the day,
Now I see the light
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 13 [informant] => dark_poetry2404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lying Here Alone

Contributed by dark_poetry2404 on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:40:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I lie here alone and
watch my life go by,
I watch all i've ever
known slowly fade away,
I live my wretched life
wishing to die,
When I know my debts
I can no longer pay,
I watch my dreams and
hopes go down the drain,
I watch my blood slowly fall to the floor as I think of all my pain,
I watch my once called
happy life turn to hell,
I think of all my strife,
Hell starts when you hear
that wedding bell,
When I wish I could end my life,
I lie here and think why am
I hear,
I lie hear and wish my life
was better,
When all I feel is pain
and fear,
I think of my horrid life
as I write this letter,
So now I slowly fade
out of sight,
Today is the day,
Now I see the light

Copyright © dark_poetry2404 ... [ 2004-03-01 17:40:46]
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Re: Lying Here Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:17:45 PM AEST
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Wow this is sad....powerful and well written but really good!

Re: Lying Here Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:41:57 PM AEST
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Great write. I'm sorry your life is crappy right now. But don't give up! You have an excelent talent. Hope to read more from you!

Re: Lying Here Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by wooly on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:53:06 PM AEST
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i feel this always great poam

Re: Lying Here Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:56:28 AM AEST
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i know what your feeling.. but you must go through the bad in life to get to the good. i liked this you are a very talented writer. keep it up id like to read more of your stuff.
Arden

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