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Everything I see, all I think is depression.

I stare over the balcony,
I think of jumping off.

I find a piece of glass,
I try to slit my wrist.

I stare into a fire,
I think of the smell of my buring flesh.

Why must I be forced to continue,
when others are sickly, & look forward to living?
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Torture Thoughts

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:34:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Every where I go, all I think is death.
Everything I see, all I think is depression.

I stare over the balcony,
I think of jumping off.

I find a piece of glass,
I try to slit my wrist.

I stare into a fire,
I think of the smell of my buring flesh.

Why must I be forced to continue,
when others are sickly, & look forward to living?

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-03-01 16:34:39]
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Re: Torture Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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i once had these same thoughts and i admired people who were close to leaving this horrible world. i dont know why you dont like this piece cause i enjoyed it
your friend doug

Re: Torture Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:17:51 PM AEST
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i like this alot...your thougts are thoughts im sure many have had at one time or another..its a good read..most often we are our own worst critics...its well done so dont worry.....slr

Re: Torture Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:51:22 PM AEST
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honest emotions and feeling expressed in this poem nothing wrong with it I see only that your so sad dont give up for tomorrow is a new day and soon a better one with a colorful rainbow will be in your reach.
Michelle

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