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Array ( [sid] => 36838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dying Light [time] => 2004-02-29 22:00:55 [hometext] => I can't whistle right now... Mick might beat me up.... Lol. This poem is very very metaphoric... [bodytext] => I watched the world fade away,
I know I faded away too.
Had to get away from here.
Couldn't stand you next to me.
Held the knife to my lips and
whispered gently to it's shine.
I couldn't stand you by my side
so I washed it all away.
The knife kisses so gently
I'm entranced by my rapture.
Dragon eyes blaze with hate
as everything slips into darkness.
Screaming for all I've ever lost
and for everything I'll never have.
Couldn't stay with you and
now it's all over.
I watched the world float
into the shadow of the setting sun.

Raven's Sin [comments] => 6 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Cobalt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Dying Light

Contributed by Cobalt on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I watched the world fade away,
I know I faded away too.
Had to get away from here.
Couldn't stand you next to me.
Held the knife to my lips and
whispered gently to it's shine.
I couldn't stand you by my side
so I washed it all away.
The knife kisses so gently
I'm entranced by my rapture.
Dragon eyes blaze with hate
as everything slips into darkness.
Screaming for all I've ever lost
and for everything I'll never have.
Couldn't stay with you and
now it's all over.
I watched the world float
into the shadow of the setting sun.

Raven's Sin

Copyright © Cobalt ... [ 2004-02-29 22:00:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:07:55 PM AEST
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This was so sad it brought tears to my eyes. Do not give up hope, if you are alive there is hope and the next woman you fall in love with will be everything you need. It will get better, promise.
Kie

Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:15:57 PM AEST
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Lmao at your comment....but smile slowly turning upside down as I read your poem... This is really sad..but so lovely.... Hope all is well, Jeff..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by Mick_Puttock on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:48:17 PM AEST
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sad poem, but I had to make a comment. Mick wouldnt beat anyone up, I know him, he just isnt like that !!

Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:01:56 AM AEST
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IT'S HARD TO KEEP SOME THINGS ALIVE!
COOL POEM!!
DAN!!!

Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:41:51 PM AEST
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really good. i like how its worded, really really awesome, loved it.
Arden

Re: Dying Light (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:20:20 PM AEST
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you been in pain to long.. here is a hug.. good write. sandy

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