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Array ( [sid] => 36828 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night [time] => 2004-02-29 20:40:25 [hometext] => This was written in 2000, when I was 15 or 16. I used to be a good poet at one time- wish I knew what happened. Enjoy [bodytext] => A blanket of darkness bathes the land
Cleansing it of sin
Chasing away the hurt and anger
Relieves of anguish
And takes solace in sleep.
The dark of the land
Bathing the pain of a terrible day
Slowly lurks off
As slowly as it came
A glowing sphere breaks the sky
Kissing the heavens with light
Once again
Warming the world
With hope of a new day.
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Night

Contributed by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



A blanket of darkness bathes the land
Cleansing it of sin
Chasing away the hurt and anger
Relieves of anguish
And takes solace in sleep.
The dark of the land
Bathing the pain of a terrible day
Slowly lurks off
As slowly as it came
A glowing sphere breaks the sky
Kissing the heavens with light
Once again
Warming the world
With hope of a new day.




Copyright © faith_my_eyes ... [ 2004-02-29 20:40:25]
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Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:01:26 PM AEST
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Wow. Here's that very, very vivid style I've seen before. Nice job. But you're always a good poet.
Keep it up.


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:56:07 PM AEST
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There is nothing wrong with your work. It is beautiful and you will only get better. Do not be discouraged and keep writing. Your style is lovely and I don't see that it needs improvement. More and more can only make you better.

Rainbows,
Rita


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:42:08 PM AEST
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Nothing happened...Good work here!!
Jenni


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Pwei on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:23:43 PM AEST
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Hiya, I like this. Its really powerful. You haven't lost the spark. Sometimes it just burns brighter than at other times. BE happy! Glitter and purple clouds...MARK


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Pwei on Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:24:21 PM AEST
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Hiya, I like this. Its really powerful. You haven't lost the spark. Sometimes it just burns brighter than at other times. BE happy! Glitter and purple clouds...MARK


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST
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You haven't lost the poetic talent. The fire is still blazing...
Take care.
David


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:00:39 PM AEST
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your writing is very beautiful.i love this. amazing write. *hugs* phil xxx


Re: Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:18:49 AM AEST
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The more I read your work Emily the more I get drawn into reading more. Never doubt your poetic talent. You got it girl.
*hugs*
Sue




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