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Array ( [sid] => 36748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so many liez [time] => 2004-02-29 02:59:26 [hometext] => ....SOMETHIN INTERESTIN ( I GUESS ) :) [bodytext] => Energy drains so quickly when pain consumes you inside. All you can think of is
all the times that you have lied.
Your eyes release the truths that you never let anyone see. Why can't anyone let go
and let me finally be free?
Every tear that fell from your cheek
was a secret you never told.
Always so weak, yet never were you bold.
Blood as cold as ice, body left so lifeless.
Bloodshot eyes of hate, all because of the unknown substance.
Nails like daggers, piercing to the skin.
You make me feel like loving you was always a sin. Heart that bleeds
into a pile on the floor.
I always feel guilty for not loving you anymore.
Energy drains so quickly
when pain consumes you inside.
I finally noticed that living without you makes me wanna die.
Souls that were one, separated into two.
Nowhere left to turn,
nothing left to do.
Tearing out my hair, and throwing it to the floor.
Can you tell me where we stand? I have started to lose score.
Energy drains so quickly
when pain consumes you inside.
Losing you has resulted
in my silent suicide.
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so many liez

Contributed by oneteartofellpain on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:59:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Energy drains so quickly when pain consumes you inside. All you can think of is
all the times that you have lied.
Your eyes release the truths that you never let anyone see. Why can't anyone let go
and let me finally be free?
Every tear that fell from your cheek
was a secret you never told.
Always so weak, yet never were you bold.
Blood as cold as ice, body left so lifeless.
Bloodshot eyes of hate, all because of the unknown substance.
Nails like daggers, piercing to the skin.
You make me feel like loving you was always a sin. Heart that bleeds
into a pile on the floor.
I always feel guilty for not loving you anymore.
Energy drains so quickly
when pain consumes you inside.
I finally noticed that living without you makes me wanna die.
Souls that were one, separated into two.
Nowhere left to turn,
nothing left to do.
Tearing out my hair, and throwing it to the floor.
Can you tell me where we stand? I have started to lose score.
Energy drains so quickly
when pain consumes you inside.
Losing you has resulted
in my silent suicide.

Copyright © oneteartofellpain ... [ 2004-02-29 02:59:26]
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Re: so many liez (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:36:58 AM AEST
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This is very good write! Please keep them coming i enjoy your work!

Re: so many liez (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:46:58 PM AEST
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this beez Billy Roy(wink wink) it is now time for me to head on down to school(boohoo) but i wanted to let you know i read all of these at school today(tuesday) and im posting cuz you told me to post(you didnt say where so i assumed you wanted a comment) if you meant poems i post mine at deviantart.com have you been there? you should go. oh man, i think im gonna be late..gtg

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