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[aid] => mick
[title] => Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
[time] => 2004-02-28 19:44:12
[hometext] => WARNING (M 15+) erotic; I think whistling is good for you... Don't you? *Continues to whistle* Ah inspiration...
[bodytext] => Laying there waiting
you anticipation growing.
Blindfolded and waiting.
Feeling my warm mouth
as it explores your body.
Ice presses against you
followed by my mouth.
Softly moaning as I tease.
Pressing into you smilling.
Ice in my mouth roaming
all over your tense body.
Loving the taste
of your skin and ice.
Your head tilts back
as the ice touches your neck.
You moan as it touches
your breasts.
I place ice gently in your
mouth as I slowly
slide deep inside you.
You groan as I fulfill
your desires.
You beg for more
which I happily give.
I bring my hands
behind you massaging.
Ice gently touches
pooling over you.
Greedily drinking off you.
Nails dig into me
as I tell you
I have a bucket full.
This will go on all night......
Raven's Sin
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 482
[topic] => 43
[informant] => Cobalt
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
)
Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Laying there waiting
you anticipation growing.
Blindfolded and waiting.
Feeling my warm mouth
as it explores your body.
Ice presses against you
followed by my mouth.
Softly moaning as I tease.
Pressing into you smilling.
Ice in my mouth roaming
all over your tense body.
Loving the taste
of your skin and ice.
Your head tilts back
as the ice touches your neck.
You moan as it touches
your breasts.
I place ice gently in your
mouth as I slowly
slide deep inside you.
You groan as I fulfill
your desires.
You beg for more
which I happily give.
I bring my hands
behind you massaging.
Ice gently touches
pooling over you.
Greedily drinking off you.
Nails dig into me
as I tell you
I have a bucket full.
This will go on all night......
Raven's Sin
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Kie on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:54:57 PM AEST
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Every woman who reads this will likely rip her clothes off and scream "I Volunteer" and the rest of us will eat lots of ice tonight....
Suddenly I can think of no intelligent comments to leave for this one. Ummmm, it was well...
Good, real good....
*Sighs*
.........Kie
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:59:02 PM AEST
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*smiles* Here comes that whistle again!!!
Now Jeff, this is one to which I can relate!!.... Ice really does the trick for me..:>) BRB..
(Makes sure there is enuff in fridge for tonight.)
Jenni |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Angelchild on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:07:52 PM AEST
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Wow, is the only think I can think of to say to that. What I wouldn't give to experience a lover who cam eup with stuff like that.
~Les |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:09:44 PM AEST
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don't give her ice burn... lol
this is interesting... |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:13:37 PM AEST
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| *had to come over and see what all the fuss was about* lol@jenni and kie, my my jeff, very interesting evening your going to have, hope your electric holds and the ice doesnt melt, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:25:46 AM AEST
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| glad mines not battery operated lol...and my outlets close rotflmao |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:30:00 AM AEST
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| Ps.. will you do me a favor and read my Crunch of Gravel and the tinkle of a bell and comment? It's nothing like this...but I'd like for you to read and comment on it...please? |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by venkat on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:32:29 AM AEST
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| Greedily drinking..well it is good to quench the thirst of love.. venkat |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Mick_Puttock on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:41:19 AM AEST
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hmmmmm, well, all I can say is it is lucky that another mod got to this before I, as it would have been removed from this section. But I will (for now) leave it including my added warning on the title, next time, I may well delete as it doesnt really fit the general section.
Other than that, what can I say, other than ???? whats all this then? :) lol |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:22:22 PM AEST
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| lol.. good one.. got caught up into the nice romantic poem and then at the end.. i have a bucket full this will go on all night.... good good write....sandy |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by gery_giggles on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:23:11 AM AEST
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hey!...........i can relate to this,it happened this week^_^*blushes*.......i miss it.very good write....got me smiling
luv always |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:20:27 AM AEST
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Hahahaha Jeff,
I saw this and had to comment.
I think Andrew is gonna have a heart attack! lol!
Anyway, good poem,
just as innocent as you ;)
*cough* |
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Re: Icy Desire (M 15+) erotic
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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| oh Jeff, jeff, jeff, jeff, i just want to scream ur name all night after reading this. I am happy to say this is my 1000 point which is great and I love this poem soo much. You are every womans dream! I love ya man. Love::::Kirby |
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