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Wierd Little
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:26:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Disturbed little ******
No idea
What hes doing to
Himself!
His thoughts so
Deep that no
Award can dignify
But deep go the
Slits
In his damn arms-
Justifying himself
Punked, Jacked and drugged out
Thats what he is
Clean for a month
Then goes back
To the ***** he
Loves-
Self inflicted pain
From the suffocating
World
Which he
Dies-to escape
With his tub
Of E
Weird little ******
Paralysed heart
Listen
Listen because there are
People
Who care about
You
But I guess
They just hold you
Back
Wiers little ******
Tell me
Your secret thoughts
Which
You scribble
In your
Hell of a room
In which
Light from a single candle
Screams-
To fill the room
To project-
A glistening
Blurred
Image of you
Scribbling away
In a misty corner
Where you
Violently abuse
Your pen
Which rapes your
Virgin paper
Weird little ******
Sitting in the corner
With your
Exploded heart
Laying before you
Look at me and
Listen
I wont-
Hold you back
Because I put the
Exploded pieces
Of my heart
In a box.
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2004-02-27 10:26:53]
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Re: Wierd Little
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by mercedes on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:34:28 AM AEST
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| Its always sad when someone does that and you feel helpless to help them. It was a really good write. |
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Re: Wierd Little
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by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:21:19 PM AEST
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| Thats a moving, and disturbing work. Very interesting: sounds familar. |
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Re: Wierd Little
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 06:56:31 AM AEST
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powerful well constructed
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