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Array ( [sid] => 36488 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good Enough [time] => 2004-02-26 19:37:29 [hometext] => I got my grades today and this is what happened...(my grades were B+, B+, C, C, B+, A-) [bodytext] => I thought you would be proud,
I thought that they were good,
They were great in my eyes,
But to you they were crap,
You think im all brain,
With nothing else,
To you im unorginized,
But to me,
Im nothing but heart,
Yes Im a bit unorginized,
Shall I ever meet your standards,
Will I ever be good enough,
Or shall I in your eyes,
Remain a failure. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Arius-Inues [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Good Enough

Contributed by Arius-Inues on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:37:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I thought you would be proud,
I thought that they were good,
They were great in my eyes,
But to you they were crap,
You think im all brain,
With nothing else,
To you im unorginized,
But to me,
Im nothing but heart,
Yes Im a bit unorginized,
Shall I ever meet your standards,
Will I ever be good enough,
Or shall I in your eyes,
Remain a failure.

Copyright © Arius-Inues ... [ 2004-02-26 19:37:29]
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Re: Good Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:53:21 PM AEST
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I don't what they're thinking, because right around now I'm thinking that's pretty good... though I'm more for self motivation, and not someone meddling with how i'm gonna learn! good write...
~Remy~

Re: Good Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:14:29 AM AEST
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I feel exactly the same way. Great job on the poem.

Re: Good Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 10:26:01 PM AEST
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Awwww..this is so sad....those are pretty good grades in my eyes.... don't let anyone make you doubt your own capabilities....
Good write also..
Jenni

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