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Array ( [sid] => 36323 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a sunset [time] => 2004-02-25 18:25:49 [hometext] => i rarely wake up early enough to see one, but my god what meraculous beauty.... [bodytext] => The soft grains of the wood
How it runs and spirals like amber smoke
glimmering in the sun it is immortal
untouched by time or space
pure and flawless perfection.
it's beauty is almost to much to bare.
Like the first moments of the sunrise
when the sun reaches the horizon
breaking through, and brilliant in it's colors...
oh the colors;
Oranges, reds, purples, the dance of light fills my senses.
overwhelming me until i can feel nothing else.
sheer terror and euphoria at the same time.
if only it would last forever [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Strat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

a sunset

Contributed by Strat on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:25:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The soft grains of the wood
How it runs and spirals like amber smoke
glimmering in the sun it is immortal
untouched by time or space
pure and flawless perfection.
it's beauty is almost to much to bare.
Like the first moments of the sunrise
when the sun reaches the horizon
breaking through, and brilliant in it's colors...
oh the colors;
Oranges, reds, purples, the dance of light fills my senses.
overwhelming me until i can feel nothing else.
sheer terror and euphoria at the same time.
if only it would last forever

Copyright © Strat ... [ 2004-02-25 18:25:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: a sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:37:39 PM AEST
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there is nothing more beautiful than the picture nature paints in the sky durning sunrise and sunset.The desert sunsets here are some of the most beautiful Iv seen. You captivated me with this write.
michelle

Re: a sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:14:59 PM AEST
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Unlike you, I'm used to sunrises, especially winter ones - and this brings back their humbling power to me very vividly. Thanks for sharing it.

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