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Array ( [sid] => 36221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mythical Dreams III - Gargoyle Watch (REVISED) [time] => 2004-02-25 00:25:34 [hometext] => all poems i write are related one way or another to alzheimers, a tragedy all need to be aware of [bodytext] => against the backdrop of the bloodred
sunset the gargoyles sit upon their perch
staring down at the procession of people
all entranced walking aimlessly not seeing
not caring just moving steadily along past
the gargoyles with their large eyes glowing
in the dusk continously staring downward
making you feel they are counting all the
lost souls who will pass beneath thier
twin towers of death

i awake once more this time i dont want to
know what the gargoyles have to say i know
death lurkes around the corner it always does
but as much as i try to ignore they refuse to
let it be its message of death to me is strong
and i sadly have to accept its message [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 39 [informant] => maryetta [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Mythical Dreams III - Gargoyle Watch (REVISED)

Contributed by maryetta on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:25:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

against the backdrop of the bloodred
sunset the gargoyles sit upon their perch
staring down at the procession of people
all entranced walking aimlessly not seeing
not caring just moving steadily along past
the gargoyles with their large eyes glowing
in the dusk continously staring downward
making you feel they are counting all the
lost souls who will pass beneath thier
twin towers of death

i awake once more this time i dont want to
know what the gargoyles have to say i know
death lurkes around the corner it always does
but as much as i try to ignore they refuse to
let it be its message of death to me is strong
and i sadly have to accept its message

Copyright © maryetta ... [ 2004-02-25 00:25:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mythical Dreams III - Gargoyle Watch (REVISED) (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:26:50 AM AEST
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As usual very good!

Re: Mythical Dreams III - Gargoyle Watch (REVISED) (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:40:43 AM AEST
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THIS SUCKS THIS ISN'T EVEN POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WONDER IT'S THE LEAST READ SCREW LIL_ANGEL SHE'S A DOUBLE CROSSER!!!!!!!!!!! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Re: Mythical Dreams III - Gargoyle Watch (REVISED) (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:58:59 AM AEST
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as is everything. it could be better, it could be worse. it doesnt suck and it isnt great to me. that is because i in no way can or care to relate to this. life is a death sentence.

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