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A secret in my heart,
A glimpse caught in the crowd,
He's waiting in the Dark!

Lingering around the corner,
unknown to all but me!
Lurking in the back,
so no one else may see.

Ice cold breath brushes my neck,
A vicious bitter cry,
I close my eyes to hide away,
but bring it more to Life!

A brief glimpes of my fate, for when the darkness falls,
solitude a gift he will take from me,
with sickening shrieks of laughter,
mingled in his glee.

Bitter cold consumes me inside and out,
my desolate cries frozen in place,
struggling in his poison grip,
But this time my dear, theres no escape! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => antares [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

When darkness Falls

Contributed by antares on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:08:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A whisper in the shadows,
A secret in my heart,
A glimpse caught in the crowd,
He's waiting in the Dark!

Lingering around the corner,
unknown to all but me!
Lurking in the back,
so no one else may see.

Ice cold breath brushes my neck,
A vicious bitter cry,
I close my eyes to hide away,
but bring it more to Life!

A brief glimpes of my fate, for when the darkness falls,
solitude a gift he will take from me,
with sickening shrieks of laughter,
mingled in his glee.

Bitter cold consumes me inside and out,
my desolate cries frozen in place,
struggling in his poison grip,
But this time my dear, theres no escape!

Copyright © antares ... [ 2004-02-20 19:08:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When darkness Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:13:40 PM AEST
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wow, i really like this...cant explain...but i feel like this too, sometimes. keep it up, luv phil xxx

Re: When darkness Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:20:51 PM AEST
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friggin awesome! so dark so good. i loved this! keep it up.
Arden

Re: When darkness Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:30:12 PM AEST
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This is VERY good. very well written.

Poet

Re: When darkness Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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!!YES!! I turn on all the lights...Great write. Kie

Re: When darkness Falls (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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wow.. i really dont know what to say... i highly enjoyed your poem... i kinda envy you because of how bad i suck... oh by the way thank you for commenting on my "silent girls burden" i appreciated it and the advice... im looking forward to reading much more from you

~meg~

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