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Array ( [sid] => 35565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no one else [time] => 2004-02-19 16:15:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => turn away and run
never come back
because after all
it is courage you lac
the man who came
was looking for you
and because you weren't here
many lives are now through
how could you do this
bring him to all of us
now because you did this
you are now leaving on the bus
who knows where you're going
who really cares
all we care about
is all those who shead tears
how did this happen
by a mad man's hand
all you had to do
is show up and make a stand
you're dispicble actions
were only to run
when all those dead
could now be having fun
i used to have fun
but not anymore
because a silver bullet
came through my cottage door
it hit me in the heart
although i did not fear
because you will soon pay
in the future that is near
i represent those
who died along with me
just say you're sorry now
and set them all free
because i thought you loved me
but now i cant love anyone
but that was your wish
just so that you could run and be
with that skanky little *****
but i think you deserve her
more than anyone else
because theres a gun in her closet
and id wish it upon
no one else.
no one else but you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
no one else

Contributed by SAT on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



turn away and run
never come back
because after all
it is courage you lac
the man who came
was looking for you
and because you weren't here
many lives are now through
how could you do this
bring him to all of us
now because you did this
you are now leaving on the bus
who knows where you're going
who really cares
all we care about
is all those who shead tears
how did this happen
by a mad man's hand
all you had to do
is show up and make a stand
you're dispicble actions
were only to run
when all those dead
could now be having fun
i used to have fun
but not anymore
because a silver bullet
came through my cottage door
it hit me in the heart
although i did not fear
because you will soon pay
in the future that is near
i represent those
who died along with me
just say you're sorry now
and set them all free
because i thought you loved me
but now i cant love anyone
but that was your wish
just so that you could run and be
with that skanky little *****
but i think you deserve her
more than anyone else
because theres a gun in her closet
and id wish it upon
no one else.
no one else but you.




Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-02-19 16:15:07]
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Re: no one else (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:31:48 PM AEST
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Hmm, many a dark dreary times seem to plague upon your angst... wow I sound perfectly retarted, lol. good writing you have here!!
~Remy~


Re: no one else (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 05:44:41 PM AEST
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Hey nice write here, I have one with a silver bullet in it aslo. You should check it out. It is called [ Missing in action ] regards Wes...




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