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[title] => My dear beautiful lady!
[time] => 2004-02-19 03:28:41
[hometext] => those who hate to read my poetry need not worry here after..with this I will stop writing about beautiful things..
[bodytext] => * * *
Sweetness of her voice excels chants of parrot
Blackness of her hair excels darkness of night
Bows to Kalika, whose luster excels blue skies
Served by goddess of learning and all energies
Served by Dawn and Flame she excels Angels
Her face excels full moon and full blown lotus
Cupid takes his rebirth in her graceful glances
But she destroys demon of lust and ignorance
Her movements excel the flashes of lightening
As she excels Lord Siva in their lovely dancing
She is an ocean of compassion to her devotees
Vowed to save sages and men of righteousness
Sun and Moon drink milk from her lofty breasts
At her feet Jupiter and Vishnu bow their heads
She rides on a lion of eternal law to rule worlds
To her the Queen of cosmos art my salutations!
19-2-2004
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My dear beautiful lady!
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venkat
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Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 03:28:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sweetness of her voice excels chants of parrot
Blackness of her hair excels darkness of night
Bows to Kalika, whose luster excels blue skies
Served by goddess of learning and all energies
Served by Dawn and Flame she excels Angels
Her face excels full moon and full blown lotus
Cupid takes his rebirth in her graceful glances
But she destroys demon of lust and ignorance
Her movements excel the flashes of lightening
As she excels Lord Siva in their lovely dancing
She is an ocean of compassion to her devotees
Vowed to save sages and men of righteousness
Sun and Moon drink milk from her lofty breasts
At her feet Jupiter and Vishnu bow their heads
She rides on a lion of eternal law to rule worlds
To her the Queen of cosmos art my salutations!
19-2-2004
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 04:20:51 AM AEST
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dearest venkat, i am sorry someone upset you so, i know of no one who hates your poetry or anyone elses, if that be true then where is the compassion in that poet/poetess' heart? are they truely a poet? you continue to write from your heart like you always do, that is one quality i respect in your poetry, along with your consistency, and flow, being honest here; sometimes we do all need to change how we write for a while and try new things out, then when we come back to that style we feel we are best at it has improved, i will say not which way you will write, but i do know it will be well done and from your heart, write on my friend, big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:06:03 AM AEST
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Your poetry is darn good. Whoever told you anything otherwise has no taste for imagery, metaphors, and glorification. I truly admire the pictures you paint in those neat, tidy lines, and you yourself said you were published--who are they to tell you anything otherwise?
If you're passing through a change of topic or style, well go for it, but if you intend on stopping altogether, don't. Ladyfawn was right--poetry is not a art to be scrutinized, but an emotion to be savored. And yours are quite delectably so.
"Prudence does not speak through other's words, but through the witness of the soul."
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:08:27 AM AEST
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| WHAT?????????????? Who would say such a thing?I cant imagine but dont let them get you down your work moves me to tears at times Dont stop ! Its just one opinion & thats not right! I'm sorry to see this & hope you will change your mind! Christina |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:28:22 AM AEST
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My dearest Venkat,Don't you dare stop writing about beauty!!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I behold beauty in all your work!You have an individual nature as all humans do, and I admire your skill in writing. "Hate" is such a "dark" form of criticism and if ANYONE hates your work, then why read it? I will continue in reading all your beautiful words, as all your FANS here will!!! We great poets/poetess' appreciate fine skill,and we know it when we see it! So keep writing on beauty for it is your soul that speaketh to us!!!
~angel~ always...godspeed my dear friend~Joni |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Kie on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 06:37:32 PM AEST
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Venkat---
You are one of my favorites on this site. You are gifted, talented, wise and full of heart. You make words come alive, you give us all a view of great poetry. You are the best of the best! I love the way you write, I mean that!
You have so much heart. You leave nice comments for others. You write masterpieces with each work you submit. You impress me, make me want to improve in every way.
Please don't stop writing! Don't change a thing unless you wish to change because I am your forever fan!!!
You wouldn't want to let a fan down would ya?
Kie |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:54:01 PM AEST
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you sing the most beautiful songs of the soul my friend please do not stop....there is room on this site for all types of poetry and if someone does not enjoy they should just go on to the next write....but many of us are uplifted by your work ...you are an inspiration
Shari |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:15:30 AM AEST
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When your soul is filled with beauty of Divine Mother how can you stop writing divinely beautiful poems my friend..this one poem is enough to show your true beautiful self.
I was never tired to read you most wonderful poetry. Snigdha |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 05:58:28 AM AEST
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Oh Venkat in a world so filled with hate, and so little love left, you must realize....there are those that want to hurt....because they themselves are hurting miserably! Your heart is always beautiful, and kind, and if they can't see that.....it will be fine with us....for we can, and we love it.....forgot what those who hate have to say....they will go on hating for the rest of their days!
Beautiful Venkat.......don't listen to them....they just want to hurt you because you are beautiful!
your loving friend
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:52:58 AM AEST
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| none can hate you..none have crticised you..I am your true follower..this poem is written for me..K |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by bhavnas on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST
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| you write so beautiful that no words can ornament praise for it....just heavenly...smiles....bhavna |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by arden on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:36:50 AM AEST
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thats awesome! nice wording, i enjoyed it alot.
Arden |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 01:40:26 AM AEST
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| wow...another masterpiece, from a master poet....this was really great, i enjoyed it...great job |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 12:06:16 AM AEST
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Mercy friend,
Don't know who wants u to stop writing about beauty but they have the problem, not U.
Freedom of Speach, my dear, sweet, wise friend.
This write is tottally awesome and if someone can't see that, well, I feel for them.
Majority rules so keep up the magical, great works of art.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 02:03:47 AM AEST
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Is it because of the relative anonymity of the web that people can be so rude and mean?
When one has spewed out such venom wouldn't it leave one just feeling soiled and lowly?
And if not wouldn't that be a cause for deep concern for them.
Please do not let such vitriol stop you from writing of beauty. This world lacks so much and it is our duty to add beauty to this world. You, my esteemed friend, do add beauty to my life when you write and as you can see from the previous postings to many other lives as well.
May the universe shine on you,
Rita
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:23:53 AM AEST
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I hope you are not serious!! We all love your beautiful and inspiring work... Don't you dare stop...
Jenni |
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Re: My dear beautiful lady!
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by thumper on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:17:54 AM AEST
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Fine poetry from a fine heart. I see you did not stop writing and I, for one, am glad! We should all thank you for sharing your talent. You are an inspiration! And SHAME SHAME SHAME on whomever said differently.
Peace to You
Thumps
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