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Blue lagoons

Contributed by Aika on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 07:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Twenty minutes left
Before train takes me
To station at the world end
No escape from here

When like a lightning
You walked around
Slowly, silently
I saw only your eyes

I slowly turn
Your sight chained me
You also turn
You must my fate be

Time has stopped
Heart does not beat
in your lagoons I am drowned
in your eyes, blue

Petrified like animal
The sight, world is turning
What i see, cant put me back
Salt tears falling down my cheeks

I am hungry bee
Youre my pollen blossom
I am thirtsty country
Youre my saving storm

I am snowflake
Youre frozen land
I am candle
Youre fire candent

You softly walk to me
with hankey my tears you dry
With finger caress lips
hand put on my heart

Standing here with me
To hell with reality
Quivering my knees
But your train is near

you kiss my eyes silently
tears running down my cheeks
Dying little hungry bee
Why must you leave?

I still see you
You standing by window
You and your lagoons
Speaking without words

It is late, and will always be
No good-bye, nor farewell
In my heart cruel loneliness
Where are you gone, my fate??

dvacet minut zbv
Ne mě vlak odveze
Na stanici na konci světa
Odtamtud uniknout nelze


Kdy jako blesk z nebes
Kolem proel jsi
pomalm tichm krokem
J vnmala jen tv oči

Pomalu se otčm
Spoutal mě pohled tvůj
ty se otč
jsi osud můj

Zastavil se čas
Srdce přestalo bt
Topm se v tvch lagunch
V tvch modrch očch

Strnul jako vyplaen zvěř
Ten pohled, svět se mi toč
To,co vidm, nevrt mě zpět
Slzy slan stkaj po tvřch

Jsem hladov včela
Ty můj pylov květ
Jsem vyprahl země
A ty můj dť

Jsem sněhov vločka
Ty chladn země
jsem svčka
ty hnouc oheň

Jak lehce přistoup ke mně
Kapesnčkem slzy setře
Rty pohlad prstem
Ruku svou polo na m srdce


Stoj tu se mnou
Realitu vzal ďas
Kolena se mi třesou
Jenome přiel tvůj čas

Tvůj vlak prvě přijel
A ty němě polb m včka
Proud slz se z oč vyraz
Umr hladov včelička

Vidm tě pořd jako kdysi
jak u okna stl jsi
Ty a tv laguny
oči jen beze slov mluv

U je pozdě, vdycky bude
dn na shledanou ani sbohem
krut samota srdce
kam utk, můj osude???




Copyright © Aika ... [ 2004-02-15 19:49:53]
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Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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i know how this person feels right now!...its so sad and so good!.......<br /> luv always


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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so well written brought tear to my eyes<br /> Shari


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:31:08 PM AEST
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Incredibly beautiful. I saw it all in my mind. A masterpiece this one is! Kie


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 09:33:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful heartfelt expression. I hate good byes too.


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 01:00:42 AM AEST
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I like the way you worded this poem in many of your lines! Well done! Christina


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 02:36:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful write.

~blueheart


Re: Blue lagoons (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:23:16 AM AEST
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The pain of goodbye so beautifully summed up here aika
Another good piece

steve




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