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Array ( [sid] => 34705 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Argosy of life [time] => 2004-02-12 08:50:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am very lonesome
Left in solitude
I used to feel fine
When I thought I had mates,you

Forlorn in the argosy of life
Knife through the ocean waves
Lots of hungry sharks
I do not see anything else

Suddenly like a twister
Storm had come
Argosy has broken
Water swept me down
When I thought it was my end
As a miracle I was saved
From the teeth of sharks

I am building a new argosy
To cruise for expedition
Marauding pirate don´t wanna be
I will go straight in future

For silly moments
Which nearly cost me life
Due to it I understood
Who were real friends of mine

Jsem jako kůl v plotě
Samotě ponechán
A bývávalo mi dobře
Když myslel jsem, že kámoše mám

Sám na korábu života
Vlny oceánů prorážím
Žraloků hladových spousta
Víc nic už nevidím

Náhle se jako smršť
Bouřka strhla
Koráb se roztříštil
A mě voda smetla
Když jsem si myslel,
Že přišel můj konec
Zázrakem jsem neskončil
Žralokům v zubech

Stavím si nový koráb
Popluju na výpravu
Nechci být loupeživý pirát
Zjednám v sobě nápravu

Pro pár bláznivých chvil
Které mě málem stály život
Jsem alespoň pochopil
Kdo vždycky stál za mnou

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Argosy of life

Contributed by Aika on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:50:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am very lonesome
Left in solitude
I used to feel fine
When I thought I had mates,you

Forlorn in the argosy of life
Knife through the ocean waves
Lots of hungry sharks
I do not see anything else

Suddenly like a twister
Storm had come
Argosy has broken
Water swept me down
When I thought it was my end
As a miracle I was saved
From the teeth of sharks

I am building a new argosy
To cruise for expedition
Marauding pirate don´t wanna be
I will go straight in future

For silly moments
Which nearly cost me life
Due to it I understood
Who were real friends of mine

Jsem jako kůl v plotě
Samotě ponechán
A bývávalo mi dobře
Když myslel jsem, že kámoše mám

Sám na korábu života
Vlny oceánů prorážím
Žraloků hladových spousta
Víc nic už nevidím

Náhle se jako smršť
Bouřka strhla
Koráb se roztříštil
A mě voda smetla
Když jsem si myslel,
Že přišel můj konec
Zázrakem jsem neskončil
Žralokům v zubech

Stavím si nový koráb
Popluju na výpravu
Nechci být loupeživý pirát
Zjednám v sobě nápravu

Pro pár bláznivých chvil
Které mě málem stály život
Jsem alespoň pochopil
Kdo vždycky stál za mnou

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-02-12 08:50:43]
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Re: Argosy of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:07:27 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, simplistic but hits home. What language is the 2nd version of the poem in?

Re: Argosy of life (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 09:48:40 AM AEST
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Its just a chance to read your poem first time and to put a comment for you. I don't know how much you try to write but guess You have tellents to be creative one. I remember the day it was 18th of February 2003 when I met first American friend she used to write. In next day she sent me a Poem and I loved it so much. The moment has encouraged me to translate some my old poems from Bengali to English but I didn't find my scripts. But I could write some and i never saved most of them as I got a habit not to record things righway. Aika - two best things are your key to success and they are Emotion and high thoughts. I am sure someday we together can try to publish a Book with all your best poems when I would be very closer to do it in life. Don't stop what you are doing, try new things then for your own pleasure... Loves, Nisjat/Bangladesh

Re: Argosy of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 08:31:01 PM AEST
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Hold onto your true friends with all your heart Aika.
They will always be there for you, somewhere.

steve
x

Re: Argosy of life (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:30:29 PM AEST
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you ship is with one more passenger, me, beautiful poem aika, hugs n' love nessa

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