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The first one my heart flutters to
I can’t believe you are the one I long for
Why are you the one that can touch me straight to my core
You make me feel so excited
I hang on to every word you ever said
Am I going insane
How can you take away my pain
I can’t believe you make me feel like I am in another dimension
My heart is willing to give you any pension
I try to act like I don’t care for you more then a joy-ride
But whenever you are near my feelings rise like a tide
I want you everyday
I need you in every way
But most of all I can’t tell you these things
Every time I try my body feels with worrying rings
So for now I will write about you in a poem
And think about you as I sit in my thoughts’ dome
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My secret thoughts of You

Contributed by Daydreamer on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I can’t believe its you
The first one my heart flutters to
I can’t believe you are the one I long for
Why are you the one that can touch me straight to my core
You make me feel so excited
I hang on to every word you ever said
Am I going insane
How can you take away my pain
I can’t believe you make me feel like I am in another dimension
My heart is willing to give you any pension
I try to act like I don’t care for you more then a joy-ride
But whenever you are near my feelings rise like a tide
I want you everyday
I need you in every way
But most of all I can’t tell you these things
Every time I try my body feels with worrying rings
So for now I will write about you in a poem
And think about you as I sit in my thoughts’ dome

Copyright Â© Daydreamer ... [ 2004-02-11 22:04:32]
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Re: My secret thoughts of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:37:47 PM AEST
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I think most of us have gone through some time or other in our lives...sweet write, correspends well with your nickname.

Re: My secret thoughts of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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This is very cool...it would be so neat to be someon'e secret love...but even cooler to find out..(sigh) great poem!

Re: My secret thoughts of You (User Rating: 1 )
by StarBeneathTheStairs on Thursday, 12th February 2004 @ 04:48:20 AM AEST
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Brilliant poem! Going through all that right now lol *sighs heavily*

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