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In the Closet
Contributed by
Angelchild
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Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 09:51:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Whispered words in an enclosed room
Arguing yes, arguing no
Your fearfull eyes darting to and fro
I promised you I'd never tell
Darkened closet, your hands in mine
Gripping tight for courage and state of mind
Never forget that day
The smell of clothes hung on the pole
The brush of fabric upon my head
And the darkness blotting out your terror
But mostly its the words you said...
They're all a jumble now
But it all still means the same
Terrible man, horrid beast
Did horrible things we never should have known
At only nine...
Copyright ©
Angelchild
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2004-02-10 21:51:12]
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Re: In the Closet
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:07:15 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching!
Very skifully written.
This will touch all who read it!
I can relate but not in a closet.
great job!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: In the Closet
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:08:30 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching!
Very skifully written.
This will touch all who read it!
I can relate but not in a closet.
great job!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: In the Closet
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:33:00 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written and expressed. |
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