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Array ( [sid] => 34285 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Suicide Note [time] => 2004-02-08 12:45:00 [hometext] => My mother says I'm a naturally morbid person and my psychiatrist says I'm obsessed with suicide. What do you think? [bodytext] => I killed myself today...

Put a gun to my temple
And pulled the trigger
It didn't hurt at all - it was so quick
The blood flowing down the side of my face looked fake
My eyes are open
With gaze fixed on the flowers
In the window box
There's a single tear on my face
A last regret
I didn't know where I was going
But I knew where I'd been

I couldn't go back there anymore [comments] => 2 [counter] => 380 [topic] => 36 [informant] => aboutdesouffle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

A Suicide Note

Contributed by aboutdesouffle on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I killed myself today...

Put a gun to my temple
And pulled the trigger
It didn't hurt at all - it was so quick
The blood flowing down the side of my face looked fake
My eyes are open
With gaze fixed on the flowers
In the window box
There's a single tear on my face
A last regret
I didn't know where I was going
But I knew where I'd been

I couldn't go back there anymore

Copyright © aboutdesouffle ... [ 2004-02-08 12:45:00]
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Re: A Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:37:07 PM AEST
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Hmm The poem is great, about the question well you seem to have a thing for suicide writing, I passed through a phase where I wanted to kill myself and had made even desperate attempta, now i'm really greatful i didn't manage to kill myself beacuse life is full of surprises, good and bad ones but still its worth trying don't give up continue writing you're a good poet :D
Anne :D

Re: A Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:08:12 AM AEST
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Dang man! This poem gave me mad goosebumps. It was so descriptive, it was crazy! -Hoots

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