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Shades of Grey
Contributed by
evryrose
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Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:49:30 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Read between the lines
The shades of grey
Between the black and the white
Shadows of indifference
Shading your picture
Splashing your sky with red
The shades of grey hiding behind the scarlet Stars
Always there the shades of grey
Haunting, whispering the life that could be
But they are not visible, the shades of grey
Read between the lines, they have crept into your painting, The tapestry providing refuge for doubt in shades of grey
Between the black and the white
Hiding behind the scarlet stars
Copyright ©
evryrose
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2004-02-07 21:49:30]
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Re: Shades of Grey
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by Jazz on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:45:21 PM AEST
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Short, but says soooooooo much! Always was my fav type of poem.
I must say, I do like your choice of words. You used to the phrase "Shades of Grey" enough, but not too overdue it. It definitely emphasized the point at just the right amount. I love the line "Hiding behind scarlet stars."
Once again, good piece!
Keep it up!
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