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Array ( [sid] => 3415 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Put me down [time] => 2002-09-05 21:08:24 [hometext] => Wrote this about an ex of mine. [bodytext] => Put me down at every chance
Insult me till your done
Kick me when I'm feeling low
I hope you had your fun
Scar tissue forms round my wounds
My heart begins to heal
Maybe I will repay the hurt
Then see you how you feel

You said I looked so lonely
As I stood their on my own
Your friends all bitched and put me down
I felt so alone
None of them ever liked me
You always took their word
Well, hell if you want the truth
I think its all absurd

I think their just sad lonely *****
With a shallow empty existence
I'll bring them down when the time is right
They will offer no resistance

As for you well hell my dear
Your insults no longer do me harm
I know your love for me is not that strong
So please cut out the charm
Everything you say to me
Just seems to disappear
Lets see if you survive my wrath
Just like I had to do this year

When my blood no longer seaps from me
When all the tears are dry
My resilience will stand up and laugh
I'll spread my wings and fly

Suicide was never an option
My life has just begun
You lost the best thing you ever had
Me...well hell I guess I won






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Put me down

Contributed by korax on Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 09:08:24 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Put me down at every chance
Insult me till your done
Kick me when I'm feeling low
I hope you had your fun
Scar tissue forms round my wounds
My heart begins to heal
Maybe I will repay the hurt
Then see you how you feel

You said I looked so lonely
As I stood their on my own
Your friends all bitched and put me down
I felt so alone
None of them ever liked me
You always took their word
Well, hell if you want the truth
I think its all absurd

I think their just sad lonely *****
With a shallow empty existence
I'll bring them down when the time is right
They will offer no resistance

As for you well hell my dear
Your insults no longer do me harm
I know your love for me is not that strong
So please cut out the charm
Everything you say to me
Just seems to disappear
Lets see if you survive my wrath
Just like I had to do this year

When my blood no longer seaps from me
When all the tears are dry
My resilience will stand up and laugh
I'll spread my wings and fly

Suicide was never an option
My life has just begun
You lost the best thing you ever had
Me...well hell I guess I won










Copyright © korax ... [ 2002-09-05 21:08:24]
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Re: Put me down (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 01:05:10 AM AEST
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If your ex is as bad as it sounds I would say you have won!



Re: Put me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Wilder on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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Wow, what can I say Korax, sounds like you're much better off without this ex of yours. I loved your poem, it's very heartfelt and "true".


Re: Put me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Ophelia on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 01:24:48 AM AEST
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I really felt this poem and the pain that was put into it. I hope things work out...it doesn't go away just like that.


Re: Put me down (User Rating: 1 )
by jesse on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 01:33:34 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem. I felt the strenght you have and the feelings put into it. It really was great.


Re: Put me down (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 05:59:27 AM AEST
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Great write, Korax... I agree with the others...maybe you're better off now... you showed great strength of character...and for this I applaud you...also for the poem..
Jenni




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