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Array ( [sid] => 34019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blame [time] => 2004-02-05 21:46:46 [hometext] => Don't Ever let anyone mean so much to you that they control you... [bodytext] => Everything inside my head
every time i think im dead
i wake up to see im not
turn my head and change the clock
12 hours back so i can pretend
that this night will never end
that i'll never have to spend 1 more day
living the life i hate in every way

and all these feelings deep inside
wanting to cry, wanting to die
my tears, fears and all the beers
lead me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU

Throw the empty bottle
in the air and onto the ground
shatters like the pieces of my heart
but i have no sound
my tears are quiet
and so i hide
all these feelings deep inside
and all of this
leads me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MariaXsoccerXrock [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Blame

Contributed by MariaXsoccerXrock on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Everything inside my head
every time i think im dead
i wake up to see im not
turn my head and change the clock
12 hours back so i can pretend
that this night will never end
that i'll never have to spend 1 more day
living the life i hate in every way

and all these feelings deep inside
wanting to cry, wanting to die
my tears, fears and all the beers
lead me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU

Throw the empty bottle
in the air and onto the ground
shatters like the pieces of my heart
but i have no sound
my tears are quiet
and so i hide
all these feelings deep inside
and all of this
leads me to you
and i blame you
I BLAME YOU

Copyright © MariaXsoccerXrock ... [ 2004-02-05 21:46:46]
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Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:06:02 PM AEST
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Hoohoo! I love the flow of this. It was like my eyes were cascading down a waterfall of blood and hate!!! Wee!!! Good write.

Re: Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:19:51 PM AEST
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I love this! Especially the first stanza, the rhymes and flow are awesome. Great write!

~ Moonlit

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