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The day she walked away
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 12:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel so cold, her words like ice
She told me to just forget
Just leave it be
I cant live right now
I feel so alone..
The day she walked away
This torment soothes my soul
It makes me want her back
These thoughts bringing me to oblivion
As they tell me what happened
I think therefore i am..
So am i just a thought?
It creeps over me, slowly but steady
Pain, shadows upon a wall
My feelings are so confused
But i am sure this is right
My solution is so clear
The depths... they are so murky
The pain has gone
I feel so alive
A ghost of forgotten memories
Mum and Dad, its alright
Please dont cry, just forget...
Forget the day she walked away.
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2004-02-05 12:49:49]
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Re: The day she walked away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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| A very moving piece. Moved me deeply. Well done. Kie |
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