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Array ( [sid] => 3392 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Time [time] => 2002-09-05 08:57:01 [hometext] => I've liked tons of guys, but this one just feels different... [bodytext] => This feeling is familiar,
and yet it feels so very new.
And I can't help thinking
it has to do with you.
I made you smile,
you made me laugh,
the first time in a while.
You've made this hell almost bearable,
I might get through another day,
a long as you're around,
to melt away the gray.
I've felt this way in the past,
a trillion times before,
but none of them would last.
I can't get you off my mind,
I fell so much harder this time.

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This Time

Contributed by Angel12881 on Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 08:57:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This feeling is familiar,
and yet it feels so very new.
And I can't help thinking
it has to do with you.
I made you smile,
you made me laugh,
the first time in a while.
You've made this hell almost bearable,
I might get through another day,
a long as you're around,
to melt away the gray.
I've felt this way in the past,
a trillion times before,
but none of them would last.
I can't get you off my mind,
I fell so much harder this time.

Copyright © Angel12881 ... [ 2002-09-05 08:57:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: This Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Written2bRead on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 10:49:36 AM AEST
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I feel ya. I was once suddenly drawn to someone for a reason I could not place my finger on. There was nothing there before and then it hit me all at once, it's craziness but it feels really right. I used to just be a sensible person using logic, and now there's another sense that's saying things I've never heard before. Like the middleschool/junior high emotions, I feel like all logic puts them to shame... like I should be embarrassed of not stopping myself from falling so hard... but at the same time, this is so different from junior high and the stupid "first girlfriend thing" that I went through... isn't it?

I can't get you off my mind,
I fell so much harder this time.

I feel ya. It just feels so right to some people, and to others (like me) I don't know what to think. Should I fight it or what? thanx and l8sauce>Jared

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