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Array ( [sid] => 33566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide [time] => 2004-02-02 18:04:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => They don't even notice me
all they can see is what they
want to see.

Why can't I just do it
It feels like something
Is stopping me for a reason
and it drives me crazy.

Where would I go?
Why would anyone care if
I was to just kill myself right now?

They don't even care if
they are hurting me with all
the things that they say about me.

Why can't I just do it
Why can't I just kill myself and
get it over with.

Why would anybody care
If I was to just
kill myself right now.

Why would anybody care
If I was to leave and
never come back.

Would they be happy
Would they be sad

Who knows anymore
All I know is that
I just don't want to
live anymore.

Why would anybody care
If I was to just go off
and Kill myself.
So this is my final goodbye

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lildrama04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Suicide

Contributed by lildrama04 on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



They don't even notice me
all they can see is what they
want to see.

Why can't I just do it
It feels like something
Is stopping me for a reason
and it drives me crazy.

Where would I go?
Why would anyone care if
I was to just kill myself right now?

They don't even care if
they are hurting me with all
the things that they say about me.

Why can't I just do it
Why can't I just kill myself and
get it over with.

Why would anybody care
If I was to just
kill myself right now.

Why would anybody care
If I was to leave and
never come back.

Would they be happy
Would they be sad

Who knows anymore
All I know is that
I just don't want to
live anymore.

Why would anybody care
If I was to just go off
and Kill myself.
So this is my final goodbye





Copyright © lildrama04 ... [ 2004-02-02 18:04:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:17:16 PM AEST
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the emotion is really intense, it really captures the reader. you have great skill. :)


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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this peom has tottaly transfixed me
it brought me back to when i was suicidal.
Remeber dear, there is always someone who is ganna miss u, even if u dont know who they are yet, i promise they are there


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:07:17 PM AEST
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WAIT A MINUTE. HOW DO YOU KNOW IF SOMEONE WOULDN'T CARE IF YOU LEFT? FIRST WHAT ABOUT YOUR FAMILY AND FRIENDS.


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:37:34 AM AEST
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This is the best in the suicide series, although the colored pills one wasn't so bad conceptually.... Anyway, I read it I'll rate it with a 3.3 on the Nortiscale.
norticus




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