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but no one ever knew
that I would turn out the way i did
I was such a happy joyful little kid
but now I cry from years of torement
and wonder what its like to hit the cement
from a 10story building screamin youll all be happy now
that I stoped wonderin how
how to be accepted by all of you
and still stay true
true to who i really am
so I decide to end it all with a BAM
would you even care
No, youd just stand there and stare
so to all of you that do harrass
you can just kiss my ass
for my friends I choose to stay alive
***** you all cuz I will survive
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Would You Even Care?

Contributed by aprillie on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:01:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I may be different then all of you
but no one ever knew
that I would turn out the way i did
I was such a happy joyful little kid
but now I cry from years of torement
and wonder what its like to hit the cement
from a 10story building screamin youll all be happy now
that I stoped wonderin how
how to be accepted by all of you
and still stay true
true to who i really am
so I decide to end it all with a BAM
would you even care
No, youd just stand there and stare
so to all of you that do harrass
you can just kiss my ass
for my friends I choose to stay alive
***** you all cuz I will survive

Copyright © aprillie ... [ 2004-01-27 20:01:17]
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Re: Would You Even Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:56:55 PM AEST
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i am glad u are decideding to live!

Re: Would You Even Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:14:28 PM AEST
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Whoah such determination. I like to see that. You tell them to kick your ass, that's the way to go. And just so you know I would get a lump in my throat if you or anyone I see on televison or read in the paper fell from a building. I've seen it happen, it was an accident but all the same it hits me hard. Glad to know some people can get the right ideas in there head though this world is mixed up and sending so many mixed signals. I commend you. Good luck.

Re: Would You Even Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:18:43 PM AEST
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wow!!! you just described my feelings!!!! im what others call "grebo" or "goth" or "greb" and i dont understand why it offends people that im different. ive thought of suicide, but i wont let them wear me down, im proud to be me. im not a sheep. thanc for writing such a good poem. this is definatly one of the best ive ever read.

luv phil xxx

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