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Array ( [sid] => 32796 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Innocence Gone [time] => 2004-01-26 16:17:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You ripped my innocence from me
What you just did i cant believe
Thought you were done, thought i was free
But youve come back for more, my mind i must deceive
Your tear me apart you make me bleed
The tears im choking on, you scream at me for
And say you wont stop til youve planted your seed
Your words a reflection of you and a whore
I ask myself what i did to deserve this
Ask what did i do
I closed my eyes as you gave me a kiss
And wished you were through
Finally your done, you tell me i was great
And that you hoped i had fun
Im left here crying, a heart full of hate
My brickwall around me youve just undone
I havent seen you in a while
So i live my life day by day
Last time i saw you we were at the trial
And i dread the day your out and wish to play [comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => aprillie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Innocence Gone

Contributed by aprillie on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You ripped my innocence from me
What you just did i cant believe
Thought you were done, thought i was free
But youve come back for more, my mind i must deceive
Your tear me apart you make me bleed
The tears im choking on, you scream at me for
And say you wont stop til youve planted your seed
Your words a reflection of you and a whore
I ask myself what i did to deserve this
Ask what did i do
I closed my eyes as you gave me a kiss
And wished you were through
Finally your done, you tell me i was great
And that you hoped i had fun
Im left here crying, a heart full of hate
My brickwall around me youve just undone
I havent seen you in a while
So i live my life day by day
Last time i saw you we were at the trial
And i dread the day your out and wish to play

Copyright © aprillie ... [ 2004-01-26 16:17:52]
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Re: Innocence Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:46:44 PM AEST
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Oh my! What a tragic poem! The flow is perfect for the poem! My god things like this make you think about life's injustices. Hope the bastard got what he deserved!
Anne

Re: Innocence Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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haunting poem! I can't imagine... being raped...

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