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Array ( [sid] => 32669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's Done [time] => 2004-01-25 15:01:36 [hometext] => This is my version of the famous Footprints. [bodytext] => My prints are the prints you saw in the sand
Right beside yours while I held your hand
Not by yourself, but with Me do My will
And when it is empty, your cup I shall fill
You thought you had walked along all alone
You thought there was no one on that long winding road
But when you asked Me, I told you, "My son...
I was with you in your pain and in your fun!
You'll never be lonely, not ever again
It's done, it is over your life of sin.
In the good times I'll be there right by your side
In the bad times I'll be there to give you a ride [comments] => 5 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 19 [informant] => RochelleLloyd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

It's Done

Contributed by RochelleLloyd on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

My prints are the prints you saw in the sand
Right beside yours while I held your hand
Not by yourself, but with Me do My will
And when it is empty, your cup I shall fill
You thought you had walked along all alone
You thought there was no one on that long winding road
But when you asked Me, I told you, "My son...
I was with you in your pain and in your fun!
You'll never be lonely, not ever again
It's done, it is over your life of sin.
In the good times I'll be there right by your side
In the bad times I'll be there to give you a ride

Copyright © RochelleLloyd ... [ 2004-01-25 15:01:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:06:03 PM AEST
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Very good write..I enjoyed it...I like the way you came up with your own version of something...I had to do something like that for class...very good poem...Keep writing
Jamie

Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:34:09 PM AEST
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Well done on this version as well!
Christina

Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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Wow what a loving poem! Very caring. Beautiful one with vivid imagery! Loved it! Great write
Anne :D

Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:00:02 PM AEST
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this is great!

Re: It's Done (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:02:57 AM AEST
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That was really good. I love the 'Footprints' poem. I like it even though I'm no longer religeous in that way. This was a very good write. I could feel the same idea behind it.

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