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Array ( [sid] => 32631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thanks for Killing Me Tonight [time] => 2004-01-25 00:02:09 [hometext] => I just wrote these words as they came... [bodytext] => You've ruined the one thing I wanted
Ruined the one thing I coulda obtained
Ruined the one dream that coulda been...
that coulda been fulfilled
But you had to blow this outta proportion
And make a big deal outta this,
and go cry about it to everybody and to her
Now I can't have the love I've been wanting,
because you got hurt,
when I asked her to go on the date and not you
And now she doesn't wanna get involved like "that"
'Cause she doesn't wanna hurt you again

You killed what hope was left in me,
you killed the one dream I had left,
you killed the bit of hope I still had,
and most of all...you killed my soul
And all for what?
Just so I couldn't have who I wanted
Simply because you can't understand,
that I don't like you in that way,
and I probably never will
Now I don't mean this in any offense
I'm just telling you how it is
And now, I'm pretty angry

And to close:
thanks for killing me tonight
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Thanks for Killing Me Tonight

Contributed by stalkee on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 12:02:09 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You've ruined the one thing I wanted
Ruined the one thing I coulda obtained
Ruined the one dream that coulda been...
that coulda been fulfilled
But you had to blow this outta proportion
And make a big deal outta this,
and go cry about it to everybody and to her
Now I can't have the love I've been wanting,
because you got hurt,
when I asked her to go on the date and not you
And now she doesn't wanna get involved like "that"
'Cause she doesn't wanna hurt you again

You killed what hope was left in me,
you killed the one dream I had left,
you killed the bit of hope I still had,
and most of all...you killed my soul
And all for what?
Just so I couldn't have who I wanted
Simply because you can't understand,
that I don't like you in that way,
and I probably never will
Now I don't mean this in any offense
I'm just telling you how it is
And now, I'm pretty angry

And to close:
thanks for killing me tonight

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2004-01-25 00:02:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Mouth on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 12:52:45 AM AEST
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She'll come around. Don't worry. Love always takes time, and women are very jealous creatures. We can't help who we love, and sometimes ,love can feel like a punishment. Good write

Sarah

Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:19:30 AM AEST
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A good emotional write with a powerful ending.

Well done :o)

Larry

Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:57:11 AM AEST
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Very well said.
LIfe do get complicated at times.
Hang tuff.
hug, luv,
emy

Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:18:34 AM AEST
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very nice write....
there are alot more fish in the sea....:)

Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:18:19 PM AEST
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ohhhh! im so sorry you were hurt, your such a caring beautiful person and lovely writer with a huge heart, ...if this is meant to be it will be, love knows not boundaries, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Thanks for Killing Me Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 11:16:38 PM AEST
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You conveyed the pain and anger very well. I like how you wrote it. It flows very nicely to me.

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