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Array ( [sid] => 32544 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A LETTER TO THE WORLD [time] => 2004-01-24 00:02:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Instead of pontificating about you’re own trivial little problems,
Look at others.
Open your eyes.
The miniscule worries of your mind are not a concern in this universe.

How can I change things?
What can I do?
You will find every excuse you can,
To justify why you won’t get off you’re ar_e.


What did I do to deserve this life?
You scream out to the seething masses,
This pulsating stain on the earth that you call humanity.
“They’re the one’s to blame!” you think.

But, if I can say but one thing?
WAKE UP MAN!!!
You are in control of your own life,
Your own destiny.

Don’t blame others for your failures,
Your weaknesses.
Do something about it.
You know you can.

You are the most intricate being,
If only you would realise this and see the beauty in you.
Your life would be changed forever more,
And the true being would take shape before all eyes.

Growing and escaping,
Removing the dark clouds of insanity from your mind.,
And ,as the blue skies appear in your judgment,
Sol will send a golden trail of light for you to observe the metamorphosis of your existence,
And it will come to you that we are all one and the same, my brother.
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A LETTER TO THE WORLD

Contributed by redwest802 on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:02:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Instead of pontificating about you’re own trivial little problems,
Look at others.
Open your eyes.
The miniscule worries of your mind are not a concern in this universe.

How can I change things?
What can I do?
You will find every excuse you can,
To justify why you won’t get off you’re ar_e.


What did I do to deserve this life?
You scream out to the seething masses,
This pulsating stain on the earth that you call humanity.
“They’re the one’s to blame!” you think.

But, if I can say but one thing?
WAKE UP MAN!!!
You are in control of your own life,
Your own destiny.

Don’t blame others for your failures,
Your weaknesses.
Do something about it.
You know you can.

You are the most intricate being,
If only you would realise this and see the beauty in you.
Your life would be changed forever more,
And the true being would take shape before all eyes.

Growing and escaping,
Removing the dark clouds of insanity from your mind.,
And ,as the blue skies appear in your judgment,
Sol will send a golden trail of light for you to observe the metamorphosis of your existence,
And it will come to you that we are all one and the same, my brother.




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Re: A LETTER TO THE WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:25:45 AM AEST
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amen!
Great work of art!
Very powerfull words!
luv, huggs, hope,
emy


Re: A LETTER TO THE WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:33:52 AM AEST
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Nice flow of words,makes you kinda wanna react and change the world in an instant.I looovvvveeed your last paragraph,I loved the words expressed,nice work.Oh !Keep posting !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PumpkinPie


Re: A LETTER TO THE WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:25:22 PM AEST
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I love the way you put this..Your poem has changed me already...and I think that so many people should read this and learn from it..Thank you!!!!! You are a great writer....KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!
JaMiE




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