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Array ( [sid] => 32422 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NOBODY KNOWS [time] => 2004-01-22 17:50:50 [hometext] => WHEN I GET VERY DEPRESSED THIS IS WHAT I WRITE [bodytext] => This pain this hurt
locked away in my head
nobody knows how inside I'm dead
blood on my wrist
there is glass in my hand
nobody knows
they cannot understand
they don't listen
so they cannot hear me cry
nobody knows
i just wish I could die
shaking fingers
grasp this plea for release
nobody knows
how the pain will not cease
sadness bleeding
emptying to the floor
nobody knows
I always craved for more
bleeding slowly
until my wound will close
dying slowly
nobody knows [comments] => 4 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SWEETPEALL [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

NOBODY KNOWS

Contributed by SWEETPEALL on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

This pain this hurt
locked away in my head
nobody knows how inside I'm dead
blood on my wrist
there is glass in my hand
nobody knows
they cannot understand
they don't listen
so they cannot hear me cry
nobody knows
i just wish I could die
shaking fingers
grasp this plea for release
nobody knows
how the pain will not cease
sadness bleeding
emptying to the floor
nobody knows
I always craved for more
bleeding slowly
until my wound will close
dying slowly
nobody knows

Copyright © SWEETPEALL ... [ 2004-01-22 17:50:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: NOBODY KNOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:56:19 PM AEST
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very deep and I see where you're coming from....keep writing..
Jamie

Re: NOBODY KNOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:20:26 PM AEST
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intense write this is dont give up and keep on writing it out
michelle

Re: NOBODY KNOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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u r reading my mind, i swear. this hits home. u can write so good. i hope u keep writing cuz u have an awesome talent.

WWP
SWK
FL
FF

Re: NOBODY KNOWS (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:24:22 PM AEST
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so sry it took me so long to comment, but i absolutely LOVE it, i swear you read my mind, and the minds of many others. this is my favorite suicide poem. great job- would love to see more.
-A lonely depressed girl

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