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Array ( [sid] => 32416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You say of Me [time] => 2004-01-22 16:48:43 [hometext] => To JMH [bodytext] => You say that people should have gone beyond the exterior to see my brilliant gold beneath,
And to you my heart I did bequeath,
But little do you know , there is no gold lying underneath,
But some color like obsidian, burnt and black
from pain,
And upon it lies a heavily burdened strain,
Aim high you say to me,
But now I see,
That I have aimed to high,
For I could never capture your heart, or put a twinkle in your eye,
But , my dear, I would like to say this to you,
And know only that in my heart this rings true,
I may love you for a long time, maybe even my whole life, who knows,
Know only this, that each day it grows.
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You say of Me

Contributed by MissLee on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:48:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You say that people should have gone beyond the exterior to see my brilliant gold beneath,
And to you my heart I did bequeath,
But little do you know , there is no gold lying underneath,
But some color like obsidian, burnt and black
from pain,
And upon it lies a heavily burdened strain,
Aim high you say to me,
But now I see,
That I have aimed to high,
For I could never capture your heart, or put a twinkle in your eye,
But , my dear, I would like to say this to you,
And know only that in my heart this rings true,
I may love you for a long time, maybe even my whole life, who knows,
Know only this, that each day it grows.

Copyright © MissLee ... [ 2004-01-22 16:48:43]
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Re: You say of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:53:36 PM AEST
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vivid images in the beginning and very sweet ending:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: You say of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:18:40 PM AEST
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May your love continue to grow, and never fade. Like Enya says...
"If it should fly, then give it wings
But if such a love is meant to be
Always hope, and the heart is free."

Re: You say of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:45:27 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem....... every single word is a cry from the heart........ with it you could bring tears to my eyes.......... who is that JMH? He don't know what he is missing....... Don't worry girl, you WILL get over him one day, I am pretty sure.........

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