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If I was there I would to have you read it give you a buck,
Or two,
Or a few,
I write from the heart,
That it where my poetry does start,
I wish to fly,
I wish to die
I hate my life and almost always have felt that way,
I don't know what to say,
There is only one who makes me feel good I think of him everyday,
But he is gone now and he is far away,
I wish to die,
I wish to fly,
That is me,
Jenimae Malina Haloisi
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A CRY FOR..........

Contributed by JenimaeMalinaHaloisi on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I am sorry if my poetry does suck,
If I was there I would to have you read it give you a buck,
Or two,
Or a few,
I write from the heart,
That it where my poetry does start,
I wish to fly,
I wish to die
I hate my life and almost always have felt that way,
I don't know what to say,
There is only one who makes me feel good I think of him everyday,
But he is gone now and he is far away,
I wish to die,
I wish to fly,
That is me,
Jenimae Malina Haloisi

Copyright © JenimaeMalinaHaloisi ... [ 2004-01-21 18:18:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A CRY FOR.......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:43:06 PM AEST
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im not sure what to say about this (i mean that in a good way) its a sad write...sorry to hear you feel this way =/

Re: A CRY FOR.......... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
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My dear friend poetess,
I'm so sorry dear, that no one has commented on your beautiful pieces of your heart!
Your poetry is real, alive, honest, and please survive!
I enjoyed every line Jenimae, please forgive me for not commenting every day.
For my heart too is generous, and if only I could, I'd comment on every single poem that passes my way!
Try not to be sad.........write of beauty and love...it will warm your heart, and send you flying way above,
I love you,
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: A CRY FOR.......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:44:24 PM AEST
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I think your poetry is fine. Its from you heart, you express how you feel and interpret that to the reader. Hang in there, in time you'll get more comments. Kie

Re: A CRY FOR.......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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sorry hon in truth i have been out of it for the past couple of days. i commented on the one before this which was good. im just lost right now lol. what fun.

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