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Array ( [sid] => 32309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My sucide [time] => 2004-01-21 16:32:06 [hometext] => i wrote this awhile ago but i just found it so i decided to put it on here. i still feel this way [bodytext] => This is for anyone who cares:
I have to do this.
I can't be caught in lies anymore,
I can't stand being lied to anymore.
The torute of wars between friends,
is getting too tough.
The broken promises, lies, and the broken hearts, they hurt so much.
I can't stand to be played or messed around with.
My pain i can't handle anymore.

Katie, I know you love me so very much. you were the only one i really trusted. I never told you the whole story but through Ryan and others i hope u can put my story together. You never pushed me to talk to you and you were always there. Don't cry over me too much honey. I will be here with you. I will miss u so much.

Ryan, I never really told you how much you meant to me. You helped me find out what love really is without hurting me. You taught me that all guys aren't jerks and they aren't all out to hurt me. You were there to comfort me and to guide me. now just because i have left you, doesn't mean u can leave too. I don't want you to do anything stupid, you have your full life ahead of u. be there for katie for me please. i know u don't know here but explain things for me. i wanted you to be happy so i decided to leave, to not be a burden on you.

To everyone:
i left because i didn't want to burden anyone else. i am free of my pain now and free from the storm. just to let you all know that i love you.

Written With a Pen
Sealed With A Kiss
Forever Will Be Loved
Forever Will Be Missed [comments] => 3 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 36 [informant] => saddarkgirlreingsthenight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
My sucide

Contributed by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



This is for anyone who cares:
I have to do this.
I can't be caught in lies anymore,
I can't stand being lied to anymore.
The torute of wars between friends,
is getting too tough.
The broken promises, lies, and the broken hearts, they hurt so much.
I can't stand to be played or messed around with.
My pain i can't handle anymore.

Katie, I know you love me so very much. you were the only one i really trusted. I never told you the whole story but through Ryan and others i hope u can put my story together. You never pushed me to talk to you and you were always there. Don't cry over me too much honey. I will be here with you. I will miss u so much.

Ryan, I never really told you how much you meant to me. You helped me find out what love really is without hurting me. You taught me that all guys aren't jerks and they aren't all out to hurt me. You were there to comfort me and to guide me. now just because i have left you, doesn't mean u can leave too. I don't want you to do anything stupid, you have your full life ahead of u. be there for katie for me please. i know u don't know here but explain things for me. i wanted you to be happy so i decided to leave, to not be a burden on you.

To everyone:
i left because i didn't want to burden anyone else. i am free of my pain now and free from the storm. just to let you all know that i love you.

Written With a Pen
Sealed With A Kiss
Forever Will Be Loved
Forever Will Be Missed




Copyright © saddarkgirlreingsthenight ... [ 2004-01-21 16:32:06]
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Re: My sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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That is so deep and so sad...and I hope you don't do that...because I'm sure Ryan and Katie will miss you and even though I don't know you...I will miss you too...So don't do it...
Jamie


Re: My sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:35:34 PM AEST
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If u have freinds that love u then u try to get help and let them help u but it is a good write


Re: My sucide (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:47:57 AM AEST
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This is brilliant! Amazing! And all those otha good things! I wrote a poem like this, but havent had the guts to post it or show it 2 any1, so i think ur brave. P.M. me if u eva need to talk...




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