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ANYMORE(LET ME GO)

Nov,18,03
Dec 6,04
5:23 pm

I don't want to hear your mouths anymore, u are with me or u are not I'm walking through the door never looking back

I'm gonna chase my dreams I will make my own family If I have to I don't need u anymore I will be alone if thats what it take I know I can do it. I didn't ask for your support. I'm my support come that October day I show u

There are no more chains around my neck, hands,and my heart
I'm gonna see the sunlight it will take time but I'm going
By 2005 u want even know me

Let me go for good I want look back u want have to look forward
You have the prodigal u want I hope he doesn't break your heart
In a year or less I want be your memories nothing more nothing less

I'm saying goodbye for good I come back when u respect me for me and when I'm strong when u have no more holds on me anymore
When u decide to let me go if I fall then good I will learn something from it and push forward not making the same mistake.

Come that October day u will find a empty bed and a silent room
I'm your flesh and blood that the only thing u have in common with me now
I came from u but not of u
I don't need your blessing on that October day

Remy Maskantinio


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I don't want to be your slave anymore(Let me go)

Contributed by remi on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:28:01 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I DON'T WANT TO BE YOUR SLAVE
ANYMORE(LET ME GO)

Nov,18,03
Dec 6,04
5:23 pm

I don't want to hear your mouths anymore, u are with me or u are not I'm walking through the door never looking back

I'm gonna chase my dreams I will make my own family If I have to I don't need u anymore I will be alone if thats what it take I know I can do it. I didn't ask for your support. I'm my support come that October day I show u

There are no more chains around my neck, hands,and my heart
I'm gonna see the sunlight it will take time but I'm going
By 2005 u want even know me

Let me go for good I want look back u want have to look forward
You have the prodigal u want I hope he doesn't break your heart
In a year or less I want be your memories nothing more nothing less

I'm saying goodbye for good I come back when u respect me for me and when I'm strong when u have no more holds on me anymore
When u decide to let me go if I fall then good I will learn something from it and push forward not making the same mistake.

Come that October day u will find a empty bed and a silent room
I'm your flesh and blood that the only thing u have in common with me now
I came from u but not of u
I don't need your blessing on that October day

Remy Maskantinio






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Re: I don't want to be your slave anymore(Let me go) (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:00:58 AM AEST
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Wow this is a great write....good for you for getting free and i wish the best for you


Re: I don't want to be your slave anymore(Let me go) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:14:32 AM AEST
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Sad but u got your point accross very well.
Hope by now things have changed for u.
huggs, luv,
emy




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