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Array ( [sid] => 32199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i wish i never called you a friend [time] => 2004-01-20 11:24:58 [hometext] => i just wrote this cause im feelin fed up. its a little rusty but i couldnt make it any better. please let me know what you think. [bodytext] => you took everything i loved away,
even though i trusted you,
even though people warned me to stay away,
i didnt listen,
i just listened to you.
you've taken my friends,
taken my life,
taken my happiness,
and taken my soul,
and im supposed to forgive and forget?
well, i say no.
No to everything youve done,
no to everything youve said,
no i wont listen,
no i wont forgive and forget.
You pulled me apart piece by piece,
you made me wish i was dead,
thats not someting you just forgive........ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lostinmyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

i wish i never called you a friend

Contributed by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:24:58 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

you took everything i loved away,
even though i trusted you,
even though people warned me to stay away,
i didnt listen,
i just listened to you.
you've taken my friends,
taken my life,
taken my happiness,
and taken my soul,
and im supposed to forgive and forget?
well, i say no.
No to everything youve done,
no to everything youve said,
no i wont listen,
no i wont forgive and forget.
You pulled me apart piece by piece,
you made me wish i was dead,
thats not someting you just forgive........

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-20 11:24:58]
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Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 11:40:26 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. Recently ive been feeling fed up with someome i considered close and i wrote quite an angry poem about them. And you dont want to forgive and forget but sometimes you have to to move on...
Brillian write

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Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:08:58 PM AEST
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A very good emotional expression.
Well done
Rakerman

Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by jme on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 03:16:21 PM AEST
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Good job. Great write.

Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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Well...I hope they learned their lesson and this was a very good poem...didn't seem rusty at all...Good job..Keep on writing...

Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:01:31 AM AEST
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Yeah good poem! I agree I had a friend once just like you've described and i totally agre with you! Great poem! Keep it up!
Anne :D

Re: i wish i never called you a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 03:52:24 PM AEST
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Wow did I like this and in my own way could relate. Very nicely done.

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