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Array ( [sid] => 31982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything You've Done For Me [time] => 2004-01-17 20:16:19 [hometext] => This was written earlier this year... [bodytext] => We talk about everything,
I can tell you everything.
You understand.
I’m glad; it means so much to me.

You listen to my problems,
And try to help.
You tell me things,
And I listen, if I can help, I will.

Just you listening, means a lot.
I finally feel like someone cares,
No matter whether I know they do or don’t.
I just don’t comprehend and I don’t want to understand.

You help with my life in many ways.
You lead me in new directions,
And teach me there are different paths to follow.
You guide me in the right direction.

Without you, I wouldn’t be where I am today.
I would be nothing; I would feel nothing.
I wouldn’t be going in the way I’m headed.
I would be in a never ending tunnel.
A tunnel of disaster, in need of construction.

My life was horrible,
Then I found you and everything changed.
You made my life complete,
If you ever leave, I will return to being incomplete.

I was in the deepest emotional mess that I could possibly be in.
You helped me.
You taught me that what others thought didn’t matter.
As long as I knew what was right, I shouldn’t care.

You helped me learn to love.
You helped me learn to take new things into consideration;
Helped me grow;
Helped me through the many obstacles in my life.

You told me about your life experiences,
And helped me learn through those.
It was a great time for me.
I learned a lot. Thank you!!
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Everything You've Done For Me

Contributed by hawaii06 on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 08:16:19 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems



We talk about everything,
I can tell you everything.
You understand.
I’m glad; it means so much to me.

You listen to my problems,
And try to help.
You tell me things,
And I listen, if I can help, I will.

Just you listening, means a lot.
I finally feel like someone cares,
No matter whether I know they do or don’t.
I just don’t comprehend and I don’t want to understand.

You help with my life in many ways.
You lead me in new directions,
And teach me there are different paths to follow.
You guide me in the right direction.

Without you, I wouldn’t be where I am today.
I would be nothing; I would feel nothing.
I wouldn’t be going in the way I’m headed.
I would be in a never ending tunnel.
A tunnel of disaster, in need of construction.

My life was horrible,
Then I found you and everything changed.
You made my life complete,
If you ever leave, I will return to being incomplete.

I was in the deepest emotional mess that I could possibly be in.
You helped me.
You taught me that what others thought didn’t matter.
As long as I knew what was right, I shouldn’t care.

You helped me learn to love.
You helped me learn to take new things into consideration;
Helped me grow;
Helped me through the many obstacles in my life.

You told me about your life experiences,
And helped me learn through those.
It was a great time for me.
I learned a lot. Thank you!!




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Re: Everything You've Done For Me (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:03:23 AM AEST
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Very nice. Hope your friend loved it and appriciates you just as much as you do them as written in this write.

Emma.




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